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A Promise Kept - Chapter 26 - The Invitation (Patreon)

Published:
2025-09-18 13:00:15
Imported:
2026-06

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More twists and turns...and some darker ones to come...

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Ryan

Lmao that last line

Edward

Ooooh, famous last words at the end. LMAO!!

Edward

I know, right? I thought, "Damn, dude. Why did you have to say that?"

mnemnoch

The last time I saw someone say that, he was hacked by a chainsaw.

TheNinja

Usually when ya say something like that Harry is pretty much guaranteed that something terrible will happen. Though can't speak for myself as I don't believe so much in superstitions like that I mean heck had black cats cross my paths and didn't bother me none, even got an uncle that has one and the cat crosses my path all the time and we just lock eyes and I tell him to walk away.

odzoo

2 great lines. The final line was awesome as others have mentioned. I also love that “Have a biscuit, Potter” was worked into the story even though he isn’t an official Hogwarts student.

Alex Gonzalez

I love that i have no clue of where you’re taking the story. It feels like you still have a thousand different ways where this could go and it would make sense. Keep doing your thing, Lee!

Sunny

What is the point of him being enrolled at Ilvermorny??? It has had SO FAR no real impact on the story and merely served as a plot device. The part between Lily & Sirius was done well, as it felt more real than anything else, but other than that... this story continued with the theme of praising Harry for merely breathing in every chapter. Also, why is it that he's basically been layed up with a full study program to beat Voldermort. I mean it's nice seeing adults in the wizarding world be responsible, but I find it unrealistic for 2 heads of houses utilising much of their free time to give private tuition to a student that isn't theirs??? Anyway, thank you for the chapter.

TheNinja

About same purpose as Lily. She hardly even seems to know how to fight and has merely been the weepy widow most of the time.

TheNinja

Yeah, I'll keep reading this mainly to see how it ends, but on whole not so much a fan of it honestly. Real slow development and so far not whole heck of a lot has happened of real interest.

TheNinja

And in all honesty it could have ended couple chapter ago after he had saved his mum and I woulda been fine with that because that's his main reason for living after all.

Alex Gonzalez

There was a chapter where Lily was working on spells, and it's very clearly shown that she's creating or changing spells to be lethal. I don't think Lily is going to sit behind watching Harry fight Voldy and his Death Eaters.

Ola

This isn’t a story, it’s a collection of one shots praising Harry. Also, far too many internal monologues and flashbacks. There isn’t enough meat in these chapters.

TheNinja

I am not the type to be impressed or surprised easily if at all so good luck with that then.

TheNinja

That's pretty much how I see it honestly. Least with some like When Roses Bloom Again was decent amount in each and detail plus connected plenty well too though whole battlefield and tactics was bit lacking.

TheNinja

Hints can be empty promises though too or potentially misdirects depending.

TheNinja

Got herself in situation where her son had to save her and damn near got himself killed though didn't she? Where was all of that prep or those spells to damage then? Lily fighting? Perhaps, but not a lethal one, about as much one as McG honestly...too much of a rule follower and stickler for the rules to be a real warrior who will end their enemies and not spare them. And the kind that would spare their enemies is not the kind needed here.