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We are getting very close to the real meat of the story...

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James Shay

Poor Rita... Said no one ever

Gus

Splat goes the beetle! (i hear pop goes the weasle)

Alex Gonzalez

Goddammit, you've got me shipping Harry with both Delacour sisters...

TheNinja

Seems like that is a usual thing to say anymore though...that we are getting closer to the real meat of the story.

TheNinja

I mean personally I see this as a foolish unnecessary move on Harry's part to attend such a useless thing as the Ball especially when he really isn't that interested in such things in the first place. It's not like anyone was holding a gun to his head forcing him to go either. He very could have and really should have said no especially if wanting to stay out of the radar and spotlight. Politics or future be damned honestly he had no reason to go.

TheNinja

For all his time spent in the company of females Harry sure doesn't know a damned thing about them which is honestly sad really.

TheNinja

I was always glad that I tried to get out of shit like dances and events like this in school growing up choosing training or my studies instead which was more beneficial and useful really.

champagnia

That was… that was such a casual, sudden murder

mnemnoch

That was the shortest appearance of Skeeter I saw in fanfiction.

Sunny

So.... Sirius killed someone because of the possibility of what they might print on a newspaper.... OK! Also, Harry is 14.... 14, so I almost find it laughable when he's described as charming and intimidating to an adult witch. Unlike Flower, Harry had at least done rituals to accelerate his physical growth. In this story, I don't believe he's done anything of the sort like that. I do commend the author of not having majority of the chapter dedicated to praising Harry. Anyway, thank you for chapter.

TrevorTheKnight

You could choose to read something else.

Sunny

I've been reading the authors material since Green in the Grey my friend and I hope to continue to read all the stories he has planned. I'm just making a fair comment, in my opinion, but you could just ignore my comment.

CJ

Rita being murdered is very out of character. Doesn’t make sense at all. Otherwise, Really enjoying the story

Alex Gonzalez

I think that the explanation behind this Harry being charming is that he grew up with Sirius but I agree that it seems weird that he’s all of a sudden the smoothest guy ever when he’s never even flirted with the other girls in Illvermony like this.

Hadrian v.E.

You can't accuse this writer of not being puritanical by writing exclusively monogamous pairings.

Hadrian v.E.

It gives me great joy to see the rag whore being dealt with like the bug she is. Damn, write a harem for once already.