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Travis

Now that was freaking EPIC

Steve Mccormick

A vengeful and directed Harry is gonna be hell on wheels. Harry may also find a few friends capable of helping him at some point! Maybe Arcturus will cast the lost Blacks out of the family and take their family magic and funds away from them. Just a thought!

Ross

Looking forward to what is next! Great stuff cheers!

Relyks

Best chapter yet!

FangRu

As a Czech guy, I love this chapter.

Doraemax

Thanks for the chapter. I can hear echoes of those who asked you to make a crossover with fantastic beast screaming is excitement. haha. Nice chapter. Alhough... after traveling all over, Harry is still not picking up anyway to learn/ understand other languages easily? or is there no such way available?

sedition

Loved this chapter. The intersection with newt and dumbledore idiocy really highlight how different Harry is. Gellerts got eyes on Harry now to see how the fallout of him altering events plays out for England and icw

Giddy

loving it!

sedition

Also I believe that personally Charles and Minerva are going to have an unfortunate wake up call soon when they realize Harry is different from what they think He can kill, he’s a war veteran effectively, and he’s here not to be a hit wizard but to fight in the Great War against grindlewald

sedition

Will Harry consult the flamels and stoke the flames of rebellion against grindlewald in France?

Jonathan W.

I hate you. I hate you for making me wait for more. ;)

Orion Nebulous

I think this is your best fic so far. The pacing is pretty fast, but you’ve included enough detail for places and people to come “alive” and be interesting.

LittleHowy

😩.... Okay, EPIC fight sequence! But the ending needs some work. They saw him FLYY!! And Kotova was more incredulous about Harry's water prison (which was awesome btw)? It was a great reveal and BOTH the Hit-wizards and Grindelwald were more interested in his parseltongue? Which was also great and more then enough reason to look him up. I just wish there was more reaction to the reveal. Same with the Minnnie/Charlus scene. Minnie acted like Harry was going mountain climbing, and NOT spying on the most-powerful/most-dangerous/most-wanted man in the world in a foreign country... Other then that it was was a great chapter! Im so excited to see Harry's reaction, Dumbledore AND that Hit-Wizard are sooo gonna get it👊🏻

Kueltar

Wish your chapters were longer...

Marmot

Harry is not a war veteran... He fought in one skirmish in the DoM but that's it. I think he is "just" determined to make a difference and used to dangerous situations

sedition

Perhaps war is wrong word but he's a combat veteran He fought a mountain troll at the age of 11, then ended up facing off against a possessed dark wizard who was slaying a unicorn, then ended up killing said possessed dark wizard later on in 1v1 combat In second year he fought against said dark wizard possessing a little girl and in the process faced acromantula (class XXXXX dark creature i believe), against a thousand year old basilisk, and again slew the dark wizard after slaying his snake Third year, faced off against a werewolf and hundreds of soul sucking demons Fourth year, dealt with dark wizard terrorist attack, faced a dragon in 1v1 combat, multiple dangerous magical creatures in the maze, before facing the dark wizard again in 1v1 combat after witnessing his friend get murdered in front of his eyes Fifth year, dealt with the DoM skirmish while training his fellow soldiers/students Personally I consider all of the above as skirmishes with dark forces that represented Voldemort's army and just steps of the war in the shadows til it became out in the open in fifth year with DoM skirmish On top of the above though let's not forget that this Harry has also assimilated the memories/experiences of Voldemort and therefore has effectively been changed as if he experienced the war from Voldemort's PoV (not sure I articulated that correctly) Imo you can argue against the war part (though I think he's effectively a soldier by sixth year til JK wanted to inject romance into canon forcibly and turned Harry away from useful training efforts to just going gaga jealous) but he's definitely a combat veteran.

Travis

Pretty sure grindelwald can fly too