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Apologies for the delay.

Whilst I was editing, I had many other ideas come to me with how this story could go, but I noted them down for use in other stories.

A very pivotal chapter here...

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Ross

Holy fuck that was good

Robert

I knew it was coming and it still hit hard. Great chapter.

GeorgieD

Dam that was cold. It's getting a bit predictable that anytime a bad guy gets in trouble they have a portkey that works LOL. Cassiopeia

Celexs

Ooof, i was kind of expecting that, but it is just so incredibly painful to read it happening. The fall out from it is going to be intense, and I look forward to seeing how this is all going to play out now. Cassiopeia running away is one thing, I will say that I am glad they all didnt get away unscathed though on Grindlewald's side.

Lily Makay

It is a shame that William never learned about his relationship with Harry. But Harry had to lose someone and we know that Flamels lived through the war.

Jeet Jeet

I hoped that William Potter will get to know Harry's true identity before his death, but a great chapter as always.

Jay Emberhowl

I knew harry would probably lose someone but it still hit me hard , rip william 🪄 , and congrats on getting me this invested in oc's

MicRow

That was brilliant. Evil way to end it but brilliant

MicRow

Feel like I need to read this chapter again…

Seananagan

This has begun to be the most painful to read story of yours, for me at least. Still great, but painful. SO GLAD the the Flamels survived. Super bummed you decided to stick with the series of events you originally laid out in Honour Thy Blood when it comes to the Potter and Black family deaths though, especially with Harry never telling him the truth before his death. Not having Harry even attempt to heal him and not having any of his allies try either was a bit frustrating. Even if they didn't because of the fire and Harry didn't because he was in angry mode. I obviously know deaths of characters on both sides is expected and needed, especially in a story centered around a war. The fire thing was cool, It would be neat to see someone else's perspective during part of it. I am hoping it isn't just something you added to simply set Harry up for public criticism from people who should be allies though. I cannot imagine it will take long for everyone who knows about the events of the day to connect the fact that Harry is the Serpent after he rescued the Flamels. I am interested to see where that leads now. As always thank you for sharing your writing with us! Now for the short but still too long wait for the next chapter.

Chris

Damn I need to re read this chapter again. A lot of gems!

Iñaki Sañudo

Jesus. I wanted Harry to kill Cassiopea and Grindelwald before, but now I really want him to kill them, and soon. I'm looking forward to seeing the fallout of what happened in Paris, Grindelwald learning for sure that Harry is the serpent, and Harry telling the Potters that William is dead

Pgx27

Can’t wait for the raging Wrath in the next few chapters. Still a bit sad William died without knowing that Harry was his Great Grandson.

sedition

Man I feel bad for harry, saving his pseudo parents only to run back to watch his great grandfather die. Poor Charlus isn't ready, harry will feel so much guilt, especially when he knew the french defense was poorly thought out and he could've been the ICW head and provided a proper solution to stop gellert So much fallout to come, Perseus' death, Cassiopeia realizing Harry is the Serpent, Gellert realizign Harry is continually getting in his way and is stronger and stronger than he can handle, the fact his victory in paris was marred by having to retreat due to a single angry wizard is not to be underestimated, the ICW reacting to Fox and Ghost having such a shit plan for defending France, the world reacting to Grindelwald taking out Paris even if a pyrrhic victory, and so many others all reacting to the news that Harry Evans is the Serpent. Sunday is gonna be an intense chapter yo

JustAnotherFan217

Man what a chapter! That was a hell of a ride but I loved ever second! I can’t wait for the next big duel between Gellert and Harry. I feel like they need at least one more big one, before their final showdown. Can’t wait for Sunday!

Ondrej Mišo

Harry is not a healer. I think having him attempt would be out of character, having him succeed would be ridiculous. Not sure if lots of people actually saw him doing the flames, it was a big confusing battlefield.

Jon Patreon

William became Charlus in one paragraph but other than that great chapter. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

toto32000

The fighting scenes are top notch, nice chapter ;)

thevolunteer

Harry really needs to start erecting anti portkey wards. Also, did Harry show up as Serpent to protect the Flamels? Or as Harry? Because Cassiopeia is either going to figure it out, or her Hate Boner for Harry is going to reach new heights.

Silens Maelstrom

I believe it was Harry based on her reaction alone. But also, “Nick” saw him as Harry and Cassiopeia yelled “You” at him instead of fleeing if he was The Serpent. He’s known as their nephew but Serpent shouldn’t have any connection with the Flamels.

Silens Maelstrom

I enjoyed the scenes too. Only thing I saw that kind of felt like might have been overlooked was the ward guy put wards up to prevent portkeys and apparition, Cassiopeia used a portkey to leave. How? Did wards drop when Harry killed him or something?

Kiran Sreekantham

This was unclear to me too. Also in the meeting with the Russian he talks about seeing Harry’s eyes. I figured, eh, it’s fiction!

Zach B

It's so funny to me that people really hate Cassiopeia here because she is a really well written villain, but it seems like your next story will have her as one of our main good guys as the person who raises Harry. It's a testament to your writing skill

Calagon

Harry’s face and eyes aren’t truly concealed. He wears glamours to prevent people knowing his real identity. Those glamours may not conceal emotions or experience in them.

Calagon

In most stories I have read, temporary wards created by spells tend to drop when the caster dies. This is actually something somewhat addressed in canon when Dumbledore dies, just about everyone knows the secret to Grimmauld Place in The Half-Blood Prince and later.

Kevin

Cassie is a good guy in TBR’s bellatrix story. Cassie gets just way too much leeway, as do most enemies… harry/the serpent needs to start dishing out some serious vengeance now. I’d love to see him go after gaulitier or weber…