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Iñaki Sañudo

All right, it’s now time for Harry to actually kick some ass without having to listen to the ICW. I’m looking forward to him facing Grindelwald again, and also for Charlus and Dorea to do something about their feelings

thevolunteer

The Serpent is going to become a legend, even more so than he already is. Harry needs to have some training with Charlus, make sure he’s up to snuff and able to not necessarily match Harry, but at least keep up. Charlus sharing the Potter family magics with Harry would be a perfect way for the secret to come out. I have so many ideas as to where this story might be going, but I can’t wait to see your plans. Cassiopeia having some minor PTSD from Harry is perfect. Maybe this time she won’t be so eager to go after him personally, though I would love to see Minerva put her in her place. Cassiopeia thinking she would be an easy target, only to cut to Harry showing up to Minerva having kicked her ass and turned her into a slug would be exceptional.

Yash Patwardhan

It's about time The Serpent started playing by his own rules.

Kevin

This sounds very promising… and i hope for a evans/potter/black special team! This slow burn was killing me…

sedition

Such a good chapter this is what I expected to happen as I saw the way things were going with the icw but the rest of Britain joining in including Arcturus was not something I’d considered. Love how unburdened can also mean burdened by new things for gellert. I’m eager to see Harry Evans come forth and to see when the Russians and others recognize him as a parselmouth and put two and two together. Or maybe Harry will be his own man and jump in battles as a guerilla warfare fighter. Wonder if he will become the general for England or just be a solid fighter himself. Super excited for the next phase of battles now that Harry has both the fury only available from true loss as well as being unshackled by the icw and their bs approach. Fox and ghost got off lucky. They should’ve been court martialled for such a shit plan that was something they were advised against and ignored the alternative plans knowingly.

sedition

Wonder if Harry will cultivate a new persona or identity of the Phoenix as Harry Evans before he ends up revealing himself to be both. I’m also starting to wonder if the egg that Harry has is actually a Phoenix egg. Dumbledore was the one to get fawkes in the original timeline but given he isn’t facing gellert this time I wonder if Harry received fawkes instead. They do have a strong bond as his tears are inside of Harry and his feather is too. I can’t recall if albus has a Phoenix yet but I think not.

Chris

Awesome ending!

JustAnotherFan217

That was great. Can’t wait for the next chapter, Wednesday can’t come quickly enough!

Kamila M

Yes! Finally! Serpent is done with this shit and ICW :D I can wait for next chapter this Thursday :D

xJehova

I am glad Harry is making big moves! RIP Willy and Orion. Glad Orion at least came to his senses a bit before getting put down by Gellert.

Jon Patreon

So just when the ICW are getting their shit together Harry decides to sever all contact? Solid plan.

logic buffer

Good point about the phoenix. From what I remember, Fawkes joined Dumbledore somewhere after defeat of Grendelwald (?). And it make sense that a phoenix chooses a wizard. Harry receiving an egg as a gift and thereby receiving a phoenix seems like he just received it and not earned it himself. But anyways waiting to see how it goes.

sedition

Who said they’re getting their shit together. They cut the hit wizards out of the war and had them focus on hunting down criminals. Harry wouldn’t be fighting in the war even if he stayed and I doubt he’d be allowed to be a general of the army without revealing his identity and nationality etc. tldr ghost was right that hit wizards have no role being on a battlefield but Harry is so much more than that and his time as the serpent is over because he no longer needs to attack from the shadows and can do so in the open light on the battlefield now. He wouldn’t get to do what he wanted even if he stayed.

Celexs

Man the tension building in this chapter was crazy. I really look forward to seeing how this is going to continue.

RyanMK666

It just got real. Man this story is addicting!

AvidReader

Congratulations on the awesome chapter. I need to say that each and every chapter is better than the last, and as an avid Fanfiction reader I must say this is so very Rare.

Chris

I don’t think it’s a phoenix. It doesn’t fit with Harry’s persona as a hit wizard. I think it’s a quetzalcoatl

ellen

i was very much sobbing when william died. i'm also wondering if/when harry will reveal to the potter's that he's a potter? i love this story oh my lordd

mchlrx

I think Newt said, that it was a serpent egg of some kind, but not a Basilisk. I'm also guessing Quetzalcoatl but I don't really know any other magical serpents

Shadow Ranger

Or when Mrs POtter will reveal that she knows he's a Potter.

Steve Mccormick

Shit bout to get real for people who are accustomed to their actions having no consequences! Now they become the hunted instead of the hunters!