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As mentioned, we will be picking up the pace from now on.

At this point in the story, we are in February 1941...

Also, the ability to comment on chapters on the website has been enabled, so do feel free to leave your feedback over there.

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Jon Hewes

Really loving this book so far very well written

Myrdin

I feel that a lot of the story is useless to the overall plot. It would be much better more compacted. The pace has become far too slow. I think that your decision to update 2 times a week is detrimental to the quality. Take your time. To compare, Whispers of a Raven was much better planned and every chapter was meaningful. Now I feel that chapters are just full of fillers

martha cantu

I’m really liking the story and how you have written ti so far, absolutely one of my favorites.

Frankthearcher

I disagree with literally everything you just said. I like having slower paced stories and one of the things I dislike about his other amazing works are how they speed through the passing time.

Celexs

This story keeps building, I am sucked into each and every chapter.

Gina

This story gets better and better, I love the slow build, the pace is perfect. I'm always eager to read the next chapter.

madalina vasile

I hate it that I read each chapter as it's posted and then I keep thinking about it until the next one is up. You are doing an awesome job 🤗🤗

ck

More than Grindelwald, I think Tom is the greater danger to Minerva's baby once he finds out. Hoping Harry's passivity with regards to Riddle isn't going to bite him in the ass...

Lasse Moritz

That! I relate So much to this comment... in this chapter its even more so, because I wish for the conversation between minny and harry to happen😂

martha cantu

I’m literaly the same. The chapters come out in the mornings for me, so I just wake up and start reading it.

Yomira Ullon

I already want to see the meeting between those two, I already wanted to cry and it was not me who was receiving the news

sedition

This story is one of the rare few where we are focusing on an actual novel level plot vs just an arc or two. Every previous story has been harry doggedy focused on killing voldemort by any means, this is the first one we see where harry is actually building a life, he has friends (more than just allies, true friends who care for him and he can shoot the shit with), he is making comrades and going through true trials of war, he is forming a family (that goes beyond just marriage and actually getting to all the steps that come before it including teenage pregnancy mishaps) That is probably why there is some level of dichotomy in how people feel about the pacing here relative to other stories On one hand its a much richer more developed story On the other, the overarching plot feels like its moving forward at a glacial pace because harry is truly not making much progress against gellert. Then again, this isnt harry vs a band of voldemorts terrorists using hit and run tactics, this is actual war with countries being invaded and armies fighting Harry cant just go 1v1 against him (despite his attempts trying), he has to actually defeat the mans way of thinking itself (which voldemortt didnt have nearly as much support for)

Err hello

The slow world build is fantastic! really enjoying the progress so far!

Sunny

God I really hope nothing happens to the baby. I don't trust riddle jnr or gellert. Thanks for the chapter Mr McCusker!

greed

So the baby is due at the end of July - if Harry wasn't the protagonist of this story I'd be entertaining the thought of somehow spinning Trelawny's prophecy to apply to his child instead. (Yeah, maybe it makes no sense, I'm not thinking too hard about this)

Relyks

Couldn’t agree more (with Frank).

Steve Mccormick

And another amazing chapter! I know there will probably be some idiot that may want to take a shot at Minerva and the baby but they had better realize who they would be dealing with! That baby is a Potter, Black, Evans and a McGonagall! Yea better go play in another sandbox before you get on that lot's bad side!