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A new chapter for you guys.

Also, for those of you that didn't notice, you can now leave comments/feedback at the end of each chapter if you so wish.

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sedition

From the title I figured it was about time the jig was up for Harry serpent tongue Evans I think this will have a big impact on grindlewald mentally because til now he viewed Evans and the serpent as two separate entities and their ability to disrupt his plans and even face him was not taken as seriously because gellert trusted his wand would work fine and he was able to view serpent as a coward while Evans was just a fresh out of hogwarts graduate who was still nascent in his magical education Now he finds out they are the same person, it raises the risk profile especially because he has to reconcile that he’s not a coward, he is not a newbie, and he’s fought him off 3-4 times with gellerts elder wand unable to eclipse him immediately so now he flees needing to regroup. Great transition, I’m sure even folks who knew he was the serpent found their mind blown at his actual abilities when he unleashes them. Wonder how the icw and the rest of the world will respond when they hear about this.

Edward

Looks like Grindy has to realize Harry is beyond him even with the Elder Wand. I bet he is going to think about Albus' words when they last spoke about the wand not being infallible. Word of how Harry has forced Grindy to run SEVERAL TIMES and that he is actually the Serpent is going to give that arrogant little toe-rag, Riddle pause. Hopefully put some actual fear into him.

Edward

He will certainly think about what Albus said to him the last time they spoke. This will cause fear to well up inside him. Hopefully Tom will have pause and some fear in him as well.

TC1687

Someone needs to give Charlus a talking to. As if he wasn't going to call Harry. Grindelwald would have slaughtered many more men before he even reached Charlus, not that I think that would have went well, but Charlus was really willing to let his pride get in the way of stopping Grindelwald from killing more of their men.

Will

10 dollar/euros/whatever that Tom attacks Minerva and the baby

thevolunteer

I really do hope you show some of Tom’s cowardice. He was panicked after Harry took a shot at him, finding out that the man is as brutal as the Serpent should be a bit worrisome for him. I also expect him to have a bit of an accident sometime soon now that he’s in a school with Harry’s unborn child. Everyone’s reaction to the dual identity reveal is going to be awesome. Especially looking forward to Cassiopeia and Arcturus.

thevolunteer

Having read Black’s previous fics, I’m not taking you up on that.

Celexs

Well the cat is out of the bag now. I certainly look forward to seeing what is going to happen with this bit of information revealed.

Celexs

I think thats a suckers bet.

Francis

Looking forward to the reaction of hogwarts to Harry's alter ego coming out! As well as the icw that will be extremely interesting! Riddle attacking minnie or somehow contacting Gellert and telling him about her and the baby to get at harry. The reaction of Horace to the news will be interesting as he seems to hold a strong disposition towards harry. I do wonder what affect this will have for tom with his slytherin peers now that they know Evan's is the serpent.

Shadow Ranger

Well I guess it's been on the cards for a while that this would happen. In many ways Harry's deeds as Harry have overshadowed the Serpent and it was only really the mystery of his identity that made him a distraction for Grindlewald. That said it should be bothe a concern for Grindlewald that his enemy is far more than he believed and a slight relief that he has one less enemy now that the truth is exposed. As far a Tom Riddle goes ... Albus mentioned that the Gellert he thought he knew was not the type to hurt children, Tom Riddle however is vindictive enough that he would strike at the baby both to get back at Harry and because that child is potentially the next Heir of Slytherin. And as Harry himself seemed to realise even if Gellert is not the sort to strike at him through Minerva, there are those that follow him that would... especially Black.

cra ppy

Hype for the next chapters. Cannot wait to see Grindelwalds face when he realizes it has been one man standing against him all this time. One thorn to focus his entirety on

Wildebranch

And that's why you have House-elf protection.

nick

Vietnam was mentioned twice in the place gellert visited. Also the last paragraph has snake an extra time in the description as well. Great chapter cant wait for the next one.

Orion Nebulous

Amazing showdown and I’m very excited about the revelation and the turn the story is bound to take now! Great job, can’t wait until Sunday!

Thor

Amazing chapter. Im really looking to the reactions on the relevation. And the snake finally woke, curious what will happen next. Thank you and have a good friday/weekend.

Thor

Petr is the second commander after Harry.

TC1687

Good point, but it's the fact that Charlus seemed mad at Gilbert for calling Harry: "I sent for Evans", the man explained. "We can handle it!", Charlus snapped. That's his pride talking. Grindelwald was cutting his men down without breaking stride and Charlus thinks he can handle it.

Bob

You know i can not help but think that this story should end badly like harry dying or any other great tragedy but i really love this one and hope you will do more global stories like this and you know maybe you can give grindelwald this kind of victory by invading Britain and america and other big countries then making this great plots of yours and make harry and the Others win the war.

Sunny

Bloody hell!! The duel had me on the edge. I hope Harry is okay and what he was hit with has no long term effects. Anyway thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker, I look forward to the next one.

JustAnotherFan217

Do not listen to this! No tragic endings here, thank you very much. Totally agree with you about the global stories though.

JustAnotherFan217

Hell yeah! Can’t wait to get Gellert’s reaction the reveal! Now that both his enemies are one, he might have to take Harry seriously. I’d love to see a bunch of different points of view for that reveal lately. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Felix Niland

Awesome :) Can't wait to learn more about the snake, and see the reactions from everyone

Doglore63

I can't wait for the reaction now that everyone knows he is the serpent.

E. Machado

I'm just glad that I waited a while to read the chapter and now Sunday is a little closer.

Steve Mccormick

I believe that Gellert just go his ass handed to him and now many of his people are gonna question following him! It will also cause him to lash out wildly thus giving Harry more opportunities to kill him and get back to Minnie and the baby!

GeorgieD

This is my 5th time reading this story. Probably Lee’s best work.