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Another time skip here, and in the next chapter will be a shorter one

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acidwar

Let's go. Love how many children they have!

TC1687

Very good. I was expecting some of the headlines to be named though. Obviously, it isn't essential, it just felt weirdly missing.

Yeno .M Evig

A beautiful family the poor boys are outnumbered. Rosa is such a troublemaker her mother is going to grey early having her as a student. The Evan's household is a busy one for sure. As much as I'd like Sirius back I don't want to see Orion stuck with Walaburga. Orion would be like an honorary nephew for harry and probably close to Jack given how out numbered the boys are. Hope harry guides him away from that crazy girl.

Bob

Beautiful chapter but i thought harry will be learning new kinds of magic to match voldemort or to occupy his time.

Dikfor

You are a really talented writer. I've enjoyed all the stories you posted on ff. Thank you for taking the time to share your talent.

thevolunteer

Excellent chapter, and not one I expected. I am a little curious. Do you ever change the chapters based on what you see here in the comments before it is released elsewhere? It came to mind because I do agree that seeing some of the headlines Rosa is reacting too would give a little context, as TC1687 said.

GeorgieD

Great story but this Tom Riddle arch makes no sense. Evans is the same Serpent who caught Summerbee, the most feared hit wizard is sometime, but can’t catch a student who has no connections on the outside. Someone is trying to prolong this story lol.

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

He knew in what setting he could catch Summerbee. Tom is not leaving any trace of himself behind and is actively trying to hide. He is not leaving a pattern and he's not out in the public as such. You also have to remember that Tom isn't Summerbee. He is paranoid and willing to do whatever he must to not be caught. What Summerbee did was for fun and she almost wanted to get caught.

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

He is. It is mentioned in either this chapter or the previous one that he is still as dedicated to his training, I'm just not giving much about it away at the moment

Sunny

Another fantastic chapter, as always! I'm happy that Harry has a relatively large family and l like how, even with a few sentences, you've been able to give likeable personalities to the children. Also, it's good story telling how Voldy hasn't been able to obtain the locket and the cup due to his wanted status. I do wonder, though, if that may help him cause he'll be less unhinged with his soul only split twice as opposed to 4. Lastly, I personally suspect that Voldy will be defeated before Lily and the Mauraders even start Hogwarts, but it will be interesting to see how you will handle that. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one. p.s. congrats on 2.3k patrons,!

Bob

I kinda of hope he will have some great magical achievment and iam really excited for his chocolate frog card, by the way nice writing of the new characters.

Bob

Yeah it will be intersting to see the results in the future espically when you defeat the most powerwful darklord when you were young.

Laura Bryan

Thanks for the chapter. I have a weird, sinking feeling (call me a cynic) that we're spending so much time with Rosa because she'll have a part to play in the Riddle arc. I sincerely hope she doesn't die, but I am interested to see what you do with her!

cra ppy

Man this chapter made me want to re-read the dragon scene. Anyone remember which chapter that was haha

DrMcTitties

Amazing chapter. One thing I’m worried about is the future of the Black family. I’d hate to see them fall from grace similar to how they did in Canon. In this story they have such good role models to look up to. I’d hate to see them deteriorate as a plot point.