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Another significant chapter... not that any of them aren't

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Err hello

Dang it. Got the tears going right before work!

Jaymoneyman

Damn you got me crying on my break

Celexs

Whelp the end of this chapter was emotional as hell... Excellent work!!!

Yeno .M Evig

RIP Black family and no red headed Sirius. 😔

thevolunteer

Do you ever get tired of outdoing yourself?

Tyric Gaias

I can’t say I’m surprised. But I feel like this version of the Flamels’ got the better ending than canon having a family they could love and leave behind

thevolunteer

I hope we can see a little of Bellatrix having a defense Professor she respects and an extended family in the Potter/Evans families make a positive change.

Bob

Again best story ever,beautiful ending for the flamels and man you are just out doing yourself again, by the way have you shortend the chapters i feel like i finish them real quickly and is there a possiblty to post another one or make the chapters longer, by the way you have not mentioned the new story i thought you would have published the first chapter by now,and again great job with the new plot and characters, i like harrys kids and the plot and i think Rosa will play quidditch prof.

wild_bill

I love Harry teaching DADA. It’s my favorite. He always feels right being a teacher and staying at “his first home”

Give me good fanfic

Will you let Charles and Arcturus ever know who Harry truly is? That would be an interesting talk.

Sunny

I feel like Jack is basically Harry if his parents raised him and the chapter was written wonderfully. I am concerned that Voldy is getting back to a level where he could become a problem to Harry, but hopefully Dumbledore will help him this time along with Arcturus and Charlus. Also, re the last comment, I really do hope Harry tells Charlus and Angela who he is, especially when Dorea hopefully becomes pregnant with James. Lastly, the ending was emotional but it kinda makes sense, as you'd think Nicolas and Perenelle would see Harry as their kin and if they were to bury him due to old age it would be heart breaking for them. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

odzoo

This one was only 6000 words so it was pretty short. My Father, My Hero wasn't too bad at 6800 words, but the one before (A New Year) was even shorter than this one at 5800. Basically 2 out of the last 3 have been unusually short, so not your imagination.

Morgan C Williams

It feels like the ending of an age in Harry's story. Yes he never had a traditional set of parents growing up but even with the potters after the time travel the flamels truly became those parents he always wanted in a way. Up until this point in the story harry has had that emotional support that others bar Minerva could not provide from the flamels. Even with everything harry has done this really feels like the point where harry has to finally become the man he was always suppose to be. It's heart breaking in a lot of ways but like ignotus passing the cloak to his son this feels like nicolus and pernelle passing along a very important and necessary lesson to harry. Was it for a selfish reason? One could argue yes but then again you could argue yes for alot of things. I'm not sure where the author will go with this plot point and what purpose the stone could serve going forward in the story but like many others I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat to discover what happens next time on this episode of dragon ba.....I mean when the roses bloom again. Thanks to the author for another wonderful chapter.

Seananagan

That ending - This shit hurted