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I can feel a second war brewing...

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Sean

Odd that Rosa is married off already. Maybe large time skip but between the parseltongue and dad, I would have thought to expect more independence and a stronger personality.

Kyle Spence

I know this is a huge build up but I kinda of hope we avoid the war. We have a true veteran of unimaginable skill vs a rookie wannabe dark lord. Like this storm should be quick, violent and public reminding people who Evans is.

BattleMaster

Agreed the hardest action for Harry should be finding the horcruxes. Battle wise he should wipe the floor with death eaters.

Yeno .M Evig

Arrogant french sods, Harry's eternal foe. Bella is a sweetheart. Jack grew up into a good man. Nice to see a bit of Jasmine being a big sister. Looks like the twins inherited their father's wanderlust. tyftc

Bob

Yeah it was odd and i sense there is more to it and i already do not like her husband and what about the harpies and the english team, but anyway iam excited for the coming and really likes jacks personality and i think the war would not be the hardest thing to over come it will be the horcruxs, iam quite excited about lily and dont really know How you are going to do it,i also had a thought of Harry being a minister for a year or so to win this coming war cause it will be nice change and then he can go to howgowarts to resume teaching.

RyanMK666

Curious if you’re going to have Harry speak in a meeting and warn anyone that if they align themselves with riddle now known as Voldemort they would be treated with the same justice as riddle himself. Aka death. That would undercut Tom and devastate any hope he had of gaining allies by announcing his blood status, aka son of a muggle and a squib, pure bloods wouldn’t align themselves with someone like that, no matter what. Loving this story but hopefully you don’t drag this out for no reason, let’s not make Voldemort look more dangerous than Grindelwald, who devastated the world and Voldemort couldn’t even gain full control of a single country for decades. Another war while making Voldemort look more dangerous than Grindelwald might very well hurt this story more than add to it, don’t forget just who Harry’s allies from the war are and who still respect him to this day.

Celexs

I understand building the tension, but Riddle is just more and more grating. I really just want him dead and done with. I'm not sure how to feel about a drawn out conflict.

wild_bill

I can feel the anticipation building and it’s killing me. I can’t wait for all of riddle’s arrogance to be thrown back in his face. It’s very cool how you juxtaposed both Harry and Riddle telling people that they are the more dangerous opponent. Can’t wait to see Harry squash his arrogance

Morgan C Williams

While I agree Tom is arrogant I also believe he has some claim to that arrogance. I'm also not sure that people aren't falling into the same trap that most do when imaging a civil war which is what the First Blood War turned into but it was also different in that it was an very much what we might describe as a modern day insurgency. I always liked mel gibsons discreption of a war with england in the Patriot to imagine a civil confict, he says, "mark my words this war won't be fought on the frontier or some distant battlefield but amongst us. Amongst our homes. Our children will learn of it with their own eyes and the innocent will die with the rest of us." The times have changed as they say from when harry and the others last battled across the continent and as snape once descibed the Dark arts are ever changing and so too must those who defend against it. They aren't fighting against a would be king as Grinderwalt could've been imagined. No they're fighting the joker who wants to watch the world burn at his feet as he lords over the world on his throne of blood and bone. I believe the build up too the First Blood War should have us very excited for what is to come. Thanks to the author for another wonderful chapter with much anticipation for the next to come.

Kevin

I can’t stop thinking something is wrong with Rosas husband… somewhere in the timeskips something had to happen, because this seems to be a big change of personality from when she was younger…

ck

It's already been dragged out far beyond comprehension to me haha. Harry publicly threatening anyone who joins Riddle and revealing his blood status would be both common sense on his part and would likely prematurely end the threat of Riddle, ergo I doubt it will happen since this storyline needs to be dragged out even more I think :(

Bob

I could not agree with you more my friend, Rosa is supposed to be a main charchter and it is like she is not even there anymore and i thought she would visit with her parents and family like every week like jack or something, i think like you that something is wrong with this julian and maybe he has ulteroir motive or they will breakup or some other plot happens because this whole marriage thing is very wierd.

Sunny

Definitely agree with Kyle Spence. I made a similar comment on the last chapter that Harry will be in somewhat in his prime - with witches and wizards ageing slower - and so, assuming Riddle does not rate Harry and has no fail safe insurances of his safety, the first battle does not seem favourable for Voldy, which I am all for cause we need to all the Evans and extended family to come out of this alive. Regarding the chapter itself, it's interesting that one of the Notts has agreed to follow Riddle, but l wonder if Rosalina can dissuade them from taking part. I look forward to the next chapter and l hope Harry speaks with Charlus, Albus and Arcturus about what Voldy is planning. Thank you for the work Mr McCusker and please can we have Harry reveal who is to Charlus and Angela.

Bob

Cant wait.

Ambar Fleites

Amazing chapter, as always. I'm torn between never wanting this story to end, and being eager for the last chapter so I can go back to the beginning and binge-read it. Like Sunny, I feel like every chapter I'm waiting for it to be the Potter reveal chapter, lol. I definitely thought it would have happened by now, especially with their children becoming adults and so on. But I digress, the Grindelwald arc was fantastic, and the Voldemort arc promises to be just as intense (if briefer). Thanks for always being so punctual with updates. I wake up every Sunday and Thursday looking forward to drinking my coffee and reading the chapter.

Pbc98

While Tom isnt as big a threat to harry as he thinks he is, the biggest problem is that a civil war is bloodier and not as easy as grindewald's war. Along with the horcruxes, which iirc this is Harry from book 5? So he lacks alot of the knowledge we have from books 6-7