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Another chapter, and some quite key changes to the future of wizarding Britain

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Harharryhar

Welcome James Potter - nice touch to have Harry as his god father. Will we see Lily also soon, won’t Harry track his mum and maternal grandparents ?

cra ppy

The humor of taking his grandfathers son, his father, into his hands only to be named his father’s godfather was very amusing

TC1687

He has no reason to interfere with their lives. As none of the changes Harry has made has impacted Lily, he knows she will appear on the Hogwarts express when she is 11 perfectly safe.

Laura Bryan

The Bellatrix part was quite the surprise, I must admit. I'm glad to see Harry is doing what he can there. I would love to know more about the twins and their antics—and of course, Minerva's reaction. So happy for Rosa, as well.

Yeno .M Evig

You have a knack for writing adorable kids. Love this bellatrix. Would like more povs from the Evan's brood. The youngest three girls could do with some screen time

Vak9

Lily's last name and green eyes will raise some serious eyebrows. She will be walking into the Wizarding world where her last name is heralded. That will be interesting to see how that turns out. But I have a feeling that Harry is gunna spill the beans soon that he is from the 90s especially in order to prevent the doom of the Blacks(if this becomes a plot device). Also considering Tom Riddle is/was? A wanted man in Britain for murder in the 40s might also play a factor. But i am just speculating at this point.

Tyric Gaias

I REALLY want Harry to tell Charlus, Dorea and Arcturus the truth!

Kevin

He has to tell Charlus, Dorea & Arcturus at some point to avoid losses and bad marriages. But i suspect the whole dynamic between the blacks, potters & evans will prevent or change a lot anyway

Seananagan

I am just thinking how ridiculously strong Bellatrix with this version of Harry training her could be. Given time she could probably take out Voldemort herself lol This was a nice chapter though, glad to see you're letting Bella be set on a better path and kind of expanding Harry's family. Still super duper bummed about the Flamel's and him destroying it didn't make a lot of sense, since people will likely still believe he has it since he didn't do it publicly. It would have made more sense in my opinion to keep it in case it was ever needed to save somebody. But you're the very talented author here 🤷‍♂️

Tad Piland

Amazing, you truly have a gift

Shaitan

Am very hopeful that Harry curb stomps Voldemort. I just can’t see 15 years being enough to put them on an even playing field.

Clephne

Loved the relationship with Bella, very well done and I can't wait for Tom to get knocked down, he's no match for Harry!

Sunny

Harry will likely be in his 50s before Voldy starts doing public attacks, so he'll be in his prime I suspect. It will be interesting to see if Harry is the one who will take him out and l like how you've fleshed out the personalities of his and Minerva's children. Anyway, l'm looking forward to how you conclude this arc and l kinda hope that someone else takes out Voldy cause Harry is too much of a titan for him now, let the guy rest. Thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Celexs

I love the small changes to people we know being made now. I am looking forward to seeing how they all play out. Tom still drives me batty, and I really just want him squished. The tension the builds every single time he has a scene is killing me, excellent work with that by the way. I look forward to every single chapter of this story.

LadyWolfie

I really needed this chapter after the previous one made me cry. As always I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Though part of me wished I waited a few more weeks before I got caught up lol.

Francis

Really enjoying all this especially the bella interactions they make me giggle I'm looking forward to see the influence he will hold over the blacks! And even more excited to see what people will be like when lily comes to hogwarts

Bob

I think iam the only one who likes things as they are without harry telling the rest who he is, i really like bella and the events of this chapter but i thought sirius was born in december 1959,and i enjoyed jack and happy for Rosa and i hope we will see the rest of the kids grow as well, and i think harry must be the one to take down riddle cause it is what he worked for and i hated that this thing kept hanging onto him so long though he enjoyed his life very well and i hope he kills him infront of everyone because i really hate this voldemort(great job at writing him really and the rest of characters,i think Rosa will marry soon or something like this but i dont believe anyone is good enough for her, iam excited to see some magical achievment from harry and chocolate frog card, and i hope you will perhaps marry some main characters in the evans family like daphne or fluer or even some male charchters in the future, i just think it will be nice plot.

Matthew

The thought of this generation of witches and wizards being trained by the greatest Wizard the world has seen in Flamel's lifetime. Along with the countless other soldiers and countries that Harry has at his beck and call for the war against Voldemort. It seem's like it should be an absolute slaughter when Tom decides to reveal himself.