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Written in the Stars - A Show of Character (Patreon)

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2022-11-10 14:00:10
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2026-06
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We will get into the second task for the next chapter

Comments

Asta

This chapter was AMAZING!

LockNesTom

Fucking Love how Harry absolutely slaps down Lord Greengrass and Snape. I dare say he will leave a lasting impression. I look forward to the future when it comes out that he's not only Lord Potter but Lord Black as well. Chaos Reigns!

JoshBausW

The warning at the end was awesome! And it is surprising that Sirius had more knowledge at something than Cassie ^^ Great Chapter as always!

JoshBausW

Would have been nice too see the conversation between Snape and Greengrass after Harry leaving.

nevada bagarosse

All the want is Harry/Lucinda paring. It’s the best ship I’ve seen in along time!

Justaguy33

God I want Harry/Lucinda/Daphne so bad now. I love Harry and Lucinda but Haphne is my absolute favorite ship in HP fanfiction.

W A Black

I know your aversion to multiple pairings but it could make sense in the story. Thanks for writing.

Rick Malone

I’ll add a vote for not pairing with Lucinda. For some reason that one just doesn’t ring true for me. Mainly I think it’s because for them to be together, as she outlined the myriad of reasons they can’t be in this chapter, would require actions from Harry that I don’t want to see.

Nick Coffey

Another good chapter. I am torn regarding the pairings, all the Durmstrang have a solid set of cons, while the Hogwarts girl options make more sense for the long term plans. They are used so often that it would be interesting to see something different

JDZ

Ok first off what a fantastic update. The warning at the end was indeed epic. At this point I see Harry with Lucinda even better a big FU to the pure blood movement. Absolutely loving this work. I didn’t think you could top Roses, but this is on its way.

Mitch Housler

Cop that Snape ya git. I’m loving this Harry putting uppity dickheads in their place.

That Guy

Badass, I loved how that ended. I gotta admit though, the constant shipping comments are driving me nuts, especially the uber thirsty multi people. Romance is such a minor part of TBR’s stories, I don’t get it.

Sidraef

The end of this chapter gave me chills and I loved every word of it.

Thor

What a superb chapter. Harry was amazing at the end, so ferocious and badass. Bet Lord Greengrass felt scared, I would be. A lot of girls will end up with broken hearth I think, Im very curious who will Harry choose. I like them all, but there is something really cool about Harry and Lucindas relationship. Could never happen, but one can dream :D

Infinity22 ♾️

Feel for Lucinda, would love a pairing between her and Harry. It's something different. Another great chapter.

Shaitan

I will die on the hill that is Lucinda/Harry. especially now that pansy is moving into a sister role.

Isyataru

I will just go ahead and set up my tent next to yours on that little hill. Would love for Lucinda and Harry to be more than just Frenemies - gonna ship that all the way!!

Zee

Lucinda/Harry Hill forever! Lets make an entire city!! Though that being said given the whole Lord Potter + Black, I feel Lucinda for Lady Potter and Daphne for Lady Black

Shaitan

Maybe. Honestly I kind of want her to turn him. Immortal vampire lord would be fun

Celexs

This chapter had a lot to unpack. I really enjoy the dynamic building around Harry, and am looking forward to seeing how it is going to play out. I really enjoy how he dealt with Snape, and with Lord Greengrass, that should certainly prove to be entertaining to see continue. Excellent work as always.

RyanMK666

Guess I’m camping out right next to you all.

Home of the Brave

I hope we get reactions from Lord Greengrass and Snape in the next chapter. Also did it not bother anyone else that Snape walked into the girls dormitory without knocking?

Cody wehunt

I'll bring guns and ammunition to help fortify the hill.

Sunny

Another great chapter. The final monologue from Harry and stating the reckoning that will come to pass on his return was epic. Like others, I too hope it's a Harry/Lucinda (de-vamped) pairing and not a multi/harem story, which I find utterly silly. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

RyanMK666

Probably the start of next chapter (hopefully) will be great to read.

james brown

You exceed every expectation with each new chapter that you post!! Excellent read, and can’t wait for the next one!!

Hunter Klimes

I absolutely love this rendition of Harry. Ruthless, cunning but willing to give a chance but just one no more no less. Honestly wish this was how I conducted myself in my younger years, gave too many chances to too many people that didn't deserve it. I absolutely love your work, I'll have to throw my lot in with the Lucinda/Harry crowd. However the great writer will write what he wants and I will agree. 10/10 will read again once this is all said and done

MASTERCHEIF1229 .

Awesome story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Pancake33

I feel like Harry sort of always getting what he wants as long as he "pulls family rank" or simply shows that he won't be cowed so to say kind of diminishes the impact of his character. Nothing bad will happen because of it does he is either the better duelist, has the better family name, or can just smack talk better to intimidate the opposition. It takes away some of the tention in the story. It also just kind of makes Harry seem like an arrogant prick, maybe that's what you are going for since some rich teenagers really are like that but I thought it was a bit out of character. I really like your work so I'm only writing this as constructive criticism coming from having read the previous story.

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

He has been raised by Cassiopeia and told his whole life that he will be the Head of 2 prominent families. He will come across as arrogant at times, but that will change as the story develops when we get more of an insight into his character

SarahDavenport

Mr. McCusker I only have one thing to tell you about this chapter. I will make it short and to the point. Loved It!