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Written in the Stars - Into the Blue (Patreon)

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2022-11-13 14:00:09
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2026-06
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The Second Task...

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LT Butterfly287

What your doing with Lord Greengrass all feels quite unnecessary and childish could definitely do without it.

Isyataru

Another very nice Chapter - will need to be spellchecked before you release it on the other websites though, caught compared to your normal quality a lot of spelling and structure errors.

AlexanderR

Wow, Lord Greengrass thinking his treatment of Harry would be forgotten by the time Harry comes into his Lordships. I hope that is proven wrong.

Sunny

A nice adjustment to the second task, which felt organic. I didn't like how Snape had ultimately given away Harry's status as the Black Heir. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Celexs

This was an enjoyable chapter, I think the changes you made to the second task felt organic and realistic. Excellent work.