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Moving forward... and a Merry Christmas to those of you that celebrate it!

Covid is still destroying me, but I am slowly on the mend...

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Ray Edwards

Stay hydrated that's the only thing I can say since I had to help people with it for a year.

Ross

Get well soon and Merry Christmas - just to rub it in, I did get a lynx Africa set this year so enjoy that. Cheery chapter btw haha

Julius

Hopefully we will get some Harry vs. Death Eater action in the next chapter. It's very frustating to see how fast and smooth Voldy is getting things done

LockNesTom

Get Well Soon man! Harry really needs to knock the Death Eaters off their high horse. A dead Death Eater family would do that. Or Fudge for that matter, he's more useful dead at this point.

Eric

Can we get some action on Harry’s part. I would like to see him burning down an estate and wiping out a death eater family soon. Clearly Nott has shown his colors so go burn down their manner with fiendfire and wipe the family out to the last member then throw up a dark mark and leave people wondering who ordered the attack

ck

Seconding the comments hoping you get well soon. Also seconding the comments hoping for some Harry on DE action. He really should've killed Draco and been done with it, instead of giving a "warning" that Draco might or might not take seriously in the long run. Ending Draco anonymously (or even severely maiming him) would've also taken some of the wind out of Lucius' sails, which is a lot more important at this stage than scaring Draco into compliance with some vague threats.

Kamila M

Great chapter! And Merry Christmas to you! Ps I appreciate Harry Evans cameo :D

Michael Colburn

Merry Christmas! Hope feel better. Very intrigued by that Harry Evans reference!

Clephne

Damn! first shots fired, I hope Harry chooses to answer! And a merry christmas to you

Rick Malone

I was thinking something similar. For how determined he is, and how dedicated he feels toward fighting this war, he’s letting Voldemort get quite the head start. Totally understand he’s limited by his age and location, but I thought this chapter was a great chance for him to do something that impacted the other side and at least gave them pause. Feels like a bit of a missed opportunity, and a bit out of character for this version of Harry. As it stands now, it feels like we’re going to get several chapters of the “good guys” getting routed. Hope I’m wrong and the next chapter shows us something.

james brown

Loved the reference to your other story… dimensional time travel??

Cirex123

Yea, it makes sense in a childrens story, but not in this gritty version with an efficient and hypercompetent Harry. It‘s pretty obvious who most of the enemies are and where they go shopping and who their kids are, so it‘s breaking my suspension of disbelief that they‘re not easily dealt with.

wild_bill

Really curious to see if you pay off that reference to Harry Evans. Or if it was just an Easter egg for us. I can feel the action starting to pick up. I’m curious if you’ll include more political manouvering with Harry announcing both his lordships. You never really highlight sessions he’s a part of in the wizengamot unless he’s threatening someone but this story could use it perhaps. Can’t wait to see more

Yash Patwardhan

I really hope we get to know more about Harry Evans of this story.

thevolunteer

We had the Easter egg, let it die

Keon

I really hope so too! He disappeared? Why? How?

thevolunteer

I’m as big of a fan as the next guy of Narcissa, but please actually have Harry follow through on his threat here. He almost never does

Robert

A family for a family? Seems only fair Harry returns the Dark Lords actions in kind. Perhaps the Notts? I really hope you keep Harry in Britain or provide a way for him to move back and forth quickly. What’s the point of Harry waiting for Britain to be in ashes? If there’s no one left to save then it kind of defeats the purpose. Hopefully he starts making moves soon. Glad he put Draco in his place temporarily. Thanks for the update! Happy Holidays!

Sunny

Man I'm getting a possible Black Resurgence HP Multiverse vibes with that OG Elenour Easter egg and possible future crossovers of Harry's in the future stories. I do really like this story, because this one feels like more is stacked against Harry. Like in the other stories, except Stepping Back, Harry - after the Rocky training montage - wipes the floor with DEs and Voldy, especially HtB and WtRB. That's not to say I don't like those stories, considering the latter is in my top 3. This one, however, feels like Harry has got a major fight on his hands, both politically and in the fight. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one. p.s. I'm glad that you're on the mend. I recommend having chicken noodle soup.

AlexanderR

I hope you get better quickly, and that you had a Merry Christmas!

Yash Patwardhan

Keeping my fingers crossed for a potential HP multiverse.... or atleast a crossover between stories.

Robert

I don't think he would just because she is also a Black and is unmarked

I am lord dems

Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what MoD will mean in this story after Dumbledore finally goes to Tom's mother's home and gets the stone then gives it to harry. Loved the threat to Draco. And was hyped from the throwback references to red roses.

I am lord dems

Also I low-key want harry to kill a death eaters and carve the deathly hallows symbol into them for a message.

Robert

I definitely agree with this, it just seems that this time he has way more to overcome and much less to work with, I just hope he gets some allies to help in the coming storm. That was what I loved about Roses, even though he became OP as the story went on, he still had Charlus, Arcturus, Peytr etc. to hold it down when he was away. It seems like this coming conflict is going to be huge and he doesn’t have that support yet and he doesn’t have that same level of strength yet. Seems almost overwhelming. Excited to see how it plays out!

Thor

I can't wait for Harry to start ripping DE apart. And nice easter egg.

Jacob Duffie

I love the Easter egg you should bring more references of Harry evans more, it would be interesting if they found something that belonged to Harry evans

Sage Berthelsen

But lol.. sorry I keep chuckling. How would she have met Harry Evans if our Harry doesn’t time travel. I know it’s an Easter Egg but what if it’s not? What if it’s timey whymie stuff?