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Written in the Stars - Under the Mark (Patreon)

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2022-12-22 14:00:06
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2026-06
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Luthanor

I took days off to read when the roses bloom again. This story I am struggling to make my self continue to read. As usual, the dueling you write is the best I have come across and you add real grit and realism to the childish magic of normal Harry Potter fics, I just really dislike the MC in this story, we have been told about all his good qualities but rarely show them. And so far he just seems like an entitled prat with delusions of grandeur. His eternal anger about the death of his parents, understandably, has not changed at all, it is just the same simple anger as always that he has developed no self control over or shown any growth in its regards

Alan Bond

I can't for sure say this chapter is an improvement because half of it was a duel which are always nice to watch though it would have been nice if harry was portrayed as more skillfull in dodging and batting away spells though, also I now ship harry and sidovora. Thanks for the chapter.

LockNesTom

I really need Harry to murder a few Death Eaters right now. Voldy has been getting his own way for way too long at this point.

AlexanderR

I keep thinking that Harry or Cassie are going to have Death Eater's like Malfoy killed at some point. But maybe that'll have to wait for a more opportune moment. I like that you take time to develop things along. There wasn't really a ton of action, but there was plenty development which is necessary. Cain and Harry getting caught up, Voldemort making plans, building up the suspense about what Barty is up to, and so on.

Home of the Brave

The last few chapters have been disappointing. Harry's character build-up, the good vibes I got from the early chapters have gone away. In recent weeks, I haven't felt any excitement or anticipation for the next chapter release.

Sunny

Surely now Harry should return to Britain. I understand his education is important and Durmstrang has improved his magical combat/duelling skills, but I feel like Harry would want to be closer to home. It's not like Hogwarts is crap and who are we kidding, surely he's beyond the school curriculum and so there's little need to stay there, especially if he's been slowly absorbing the magiks Voldy had done. Anyway, I enjoyed how you wrote the scene with Cassie & Harry and the duel with the professor, which was brilliant and original. Thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one. p.s. I think Crouch Jnr is going to kill Albus.

Robert

At this point, just kind of waiting for him to make his Lordships known to smack Draco and Lucius down so things can really start kicking off. If he is just at school while things are going to get progressively worse in Britain and at the same time avoiding making a deeper relationship with Lucinda because he is dealing with the end of his fling with Alessia then there isn't much for him to do there, it just feels a little stagnant. The dueling was fun to read but it just feels like we are going to be waiting for a while if he really isn't going to make any moves until he finishes school.

thevolunteer

The fact that Cassie hasn’t been murdering death eaters like Lucius at this point is odd to me. I have very little doubt that she would be poisoning or attempting to poison him. I get that this is ‘Harry’s Fight’ and all, but it does feel a little retarded. If Dumbledore is able to kick ass, there is no reason Cassiopeia shouldn’t be a dangerous witch.

Thor

Great chapter, loved the duel and I hope that you are doing better with the covid. Thanks for the chapter and take care.