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I would like to point out that although Harry is acquainted with the Flamels, they won't feature as heavily here as they did in WTRBA...

Things will change and move on as the story progress...

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Harkin

great chapter.

thevolunteer

I hope one day you write a Dumbledore who fully mentors Harry. You almost never show the warrior side of him and I think it would introduce some variety to your stories

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

Although repetitive, I enjoy a good Flamels’ appearance. They’re so seldomly discussed within the HP universe, making it refreshing to see them appear within yours. As you’ve already stated you don’t plan on Nicholas and Perenelle playing as much of an active role within Harry’s story, I can only keep my fingers crossed and hope beyond hope this will be a Harry raised by Sirius fanfiction. I have yet to see you tackle that story arc as well. Anyways, this was an amazing chapter, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I especially enjoyed seeing Ron’s loyalty and the twins’ supportiveness shine.

Sunny

Great chapter again and I can't wait to see how far Harry goes. Also, I appreciate that your making Harry's magical journey more independent and how you've written Ron and the others so far. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Sage Berthelsen

Bit of a tear at the end but I shan’t hold it against you. Nice touch with the dual citizenship.

JDZ

Honestly even if you do give the Flamels a similarly large role as WTRBA, the basis is different enough I think to create a new relationship dynamic. Really interesting beginning to this story.

rishi547

I know you’re not following canon, but genuine question, when dobby cast a spell in Harry’s room, it set off the magic detection that the ministry have. I assume it doesn’t work the same here? The ministry don’t have the trade active?

James Stewart

‘Thirteenth day of being named?’ What does this mean?