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Enshin1006

More of a sombre chapter especially with the ending. Definitely enjoyed it and am enjoying the pacing and the direction this story is heading in so far. I'm curious as to the pairing but that will be seen. Personally I'd like this one to either be a harry/one of the chasers or even a harry/hermione. This harry is moreintrospective I feel and subdued and I think that it makes him more compatible with hermiones mindset

Jason Williams

A really great chapter. So many people have done the “harry gets inspired to live” trope including yourself but this is honestly the best in terms of weight and meaning given to his decision I can’t wait for more of this story.

Robert

I hope Hermione will respect Harry’s privacy as he begins to come into his own. This Harry will have more secrets and he definitely won’t be able to talk about the knowledge he will be reading about. I have enjoyed the characterization of her thus far and hope she continues to be a good friend to Harry. I really hate Lockhart and you’ve never really covered him in your stories except for Flower where Harry just self-studied Defense over the one chapter of Year 2. I am interested to see how you handle him. With Harry knowing how much he needs to improve having a useless fraud in such a subject would be detrimental. Excited for more. Cheers!

Celexs

I really enjoyed this chapter, I very much like the tone of this story so far. I am looking forward to reading the next installment!

Sunny

Another banger! The pacing is near on perfect and Harry's progress is very realistic. Like Robert mentioned, I do hope Hermione respects Harry's privacy. Lastly, I really enjoy your interactions, so far, between the Golden Trio, because it's so wholesome and I can actually picture the actors having those moments together. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

This was a very sombre and eye-opening chapter for Harry. You can see one version of ending and another forming. The pacing has been borderline perfect. I’m very excited to see what’s in store for Harry next.

Nick Coffey

good stuff! this is taking an interesting path