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Second year will be dealt with quite quickly after this chapter...

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AlexanderR

I've loved the pace so far, but yeah, probably wouldn't want to keep it up for every single year. Depending on how far into Harry's life this story plans on going.

SirSmellsALot

This is the first chapter that has felt satisfying to me. Whether it was length, pacing or a general sense of completion, I cannot say.

Amit

The way the story is progressing, I think it could be Harry/Fleur pairing.

Jeromey Johnson

Eleanor Summerbee granddaughter… this seems like it’s going to be an extremely dark book. Her humor would brighten up Harry’s life.

odzoo

I can see that with Harry learning French and the citizenship thing. I wonder, though, with AFFTS being relatively recent, could it be one of "Fleur's friend" OC from a previous story?

WaltD

Harry’s interaction with the past is particularly interesting in this chapter… I wonder about the possibilities that it opens for the story ahead. Thank you for the very well written chapter, this story is shaping up as one of your finest for me.

Sunny

It would be nice to have more classroom sessions (showing Harry's progression) or more original interactions between students and teachers when the chamber opens each time, therefore extending Yr 2, but you've not steered us wrong before. Re Harry affecting the past, I think it's already happened meaning that he's not changing it, but just being part of it. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Martin Black

What a moron Gawain was. Why go to the trouble of abducting Malory, instead of just killing her.