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The Reaver's Legacy - The Snake (Patreon)

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2023-04-16 13:00:04
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2026-06
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Some changes from canon here... all for the best, of course

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Sidraef

Malory Gaunt referred to Gawain as Gawain Gaunt instead of Perevell during there conversation. Was this intentional?

Rick Malone

An interesting interpretation of year 2. I’m really digging it. Though I’m bummed Harry decided to keep the diary. Part of me understands it’s a valid narrative choice, but another part think it’s forcing the character to do something dumb for the sake of the plot.

RC

Once again Draco and Snape get away scot free working together to bully a fellow student.. This certainly has enough similarities to canon this far, atleast Harry isn’t a spineless weakling though

Clephne

I'd like to see Malfoy try something after that display!

Robert

This didn’t seem like a typical Snape bullying Harry moment, more like a typical Draco being Draco moment. Also there is a good chance that Harry using that spell will keep Draco off his back or at least increase his wariness. Not that Draco was a problem, more like a pest 😂

Robert

Enjoyed the update. Something small but appreciated was how you wrote Ron in this chapter. Him being aware of Purebloods practices and houses, as well as not jumping down Harry’s throat for using that curse. Hopefully he doesn’t distance himself from Harry when the parseltongue gets revealed (if it does). It would be interesting to see somewhat how far Harry is progressing in his on Dark Arts work a bit. I’m sure that the Flamels preached that he needed to be strong in all areas. It would be cool to see him start to push himself in other areas than just those books. I’m sure he’ll be having a conversation with both Nicholas and Albus about his use of that spell at least in public. I’m more excited for Dumbledore’s attempt at telling Nick what he’s giving Harry access is wrong. unless they were purely spell books. Being able to cast a true “dark arts” spell without knowing even a simple shield yet seems like a massive gap in knowledge. I would have expected some of the tombs he was gifted would talk about dodging and shielding as well. Harry has been more proactive in this story but I hope the duel was eye opening to him to not knowing any defensive magic yet. I’m sure he’s going to be focusing on the knowledge of the Riddle Diary and the Parseltongue but it could be interesting if he wrote to Tom to ask him for some tips on magic, without having a defense teacher this would be a useful workaround Can’t wait to see what’s next ! Cheers

thevolunteer

Yeah but just because it serves a purpose, doesn’t mean that it makes sense for the character. I just can’t see Harry not bringing this to Dumbledore, knowing what he knows about TMR.

Cristobal Hernandez

Would love more interactions with the griffyndor chasers, but what a good ch as always!

Sunny

That was class and I liked how Harry wasn't fazed by Snape. What's Albus going to say to Nicholas really.... I mean the guy is a wizarding giant and Dumbledore was his student. Also, please continue to write Ron and Hermione as they are, as it's refreshing to see them not bashed. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Stephen

I'm going back and re reading all of your stories until reavers racks up a few chapters when an idea struck. You ever thought about doing a Spiderman no way home with all of your different Harry's? Each one has such a distinct personality it would be cool to see them team up against your 3 voldemorts and Gellert from Roses. I love all of your work and I have nothing but positivity and love for your writing.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

Murdering a snake, or any type of animal, may indeed constitute as “dark magic;” however, I would argue that conjuring one, especially a snake, with malicious intentions should, too, be counted as dark magic. I don’t understand Dumbledore’s insistence on speaking to Harry’s mentor without contacting Draco’s parents or even berating Snape for obviously supplying the spell. Alas, this chapter was interesting as well. I look forward to exploring Gawain and Mallory’s impending relationship, and, of course, I’m always excited to read any chapter which may possess the Flamels’ reemergence.

Daniel Sbai

Doing the same. One of the best stories I’ve ever read so far.