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Daemon sultan

The green eyes stuff are you trying to bring in lily’s lineage as a descendant of peverell x gaunt. 🔥✊🏼🔥✊🏼

Harkin

maybe change "seemingly benevolent" to "seemingly benign" when speaking of the diary. I think that fits better.

Glenn Matteson

"Interesting developments" he says. Pffft. This story continues to be absolutely fascinating. Thank you! I've been hooked since I first read "Honor Thy Blood." Your creativity and hard work are very much appreciated.

Jonathan W.

That’s exactly what I was thinking

Sage Berthelsen

Can’t wait for GH scene! Great work as always!

Robert

I am sure we will eventually see it in the memories, but how far apart are the timelines between Gawain and the Founders at this point? Maybe Carys was the mother of Salazar? Also that memory scene was quite emotive. Another well written chapter! I’m also 10000% on board with little Albus teaching Harry moments sprinkled in the story. A great way for him to know when Harry will be ready for the wand. Cheers!

thevolunteer

I dislike this. It cheapens Lily’s entire story imo. Same thing when people make Hermione related to the Dagworth-grangers slughorn mentions

Orion Nebulous

This may well be gearing up to be your finest story yet

Sunny

A really good chapter. I do find wizarding Britian still fawning over Harry a bit too much, cause I don't remember him experiencing that much in the 3rd book. Regardless, I liked the interactions in the alley with the merchants and the practical lesson b/w Harry and the Headmaster. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Nick Coffey

Carving a different path from your other fictions. I like the gradual growth of Harry and Im intrigued by how his magic will develop. Youve also done a great job with the emotional backlash of the visions, it really helps realistically mature Harry. Good stuff

odzoo

I will add your comment to the edits doc. Thank you.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

This chapter was very intriguing. I look forward to Sirius’ and Harry’s first meeting. Also, I did not expect that ending. Amazing, as usual