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Mouse Pen

Great story i hope to see Harry/Katie later in the story. The concept of Insignia and death is interesting looking forward to more

AlexanderR

A direct interaction with death. It hadn't even occurred to me that would happen. Probably should have. I'm curious though if this means that the Potter's got these visions, or is that something unique to Harry.

WaltD

A very interesting first visit to Godric’s Hollow and an equally interesting first encounter for Harry on his thirteenth birthday. Tremendous chapter, I do wish Lucius gets at least a small taste of justice. In the books it was provided through the loss of Dobby and the distancing of other Hogwarts governors but I am sure you have got the most wonderful things planned.

Sunny

After Harry, Sirius is my favourite character. I just love his unwavering loyalty and love to his best friend - brother really - to Lily and to Harry. Re the chapter, I liked how you're fleshing them out and giving them more detail. The book in the church was pretty cool. I just hope Harry continues to make progress during the 3rd year ahead of the pivotal 4th year. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one. P.S. Please can we not have any more power ups to Harry. Riddle had no such thing, apart from experience, and it's been a slam dunk, an easy 3-pointer, for Harry in the last few stories.

Reyana

Hmm, is she not buried with the peverels because she is actually Harry's maternal great great... etc grandmother? She had the same shade of eyes as Harry which would give him a connection to the Gaunts and make his parseltongue ability natural.

odzoo

I really liked Harry/Gawain's interaction with Carys. These experiences will be another reason why Harry acts more mature. He has some of the memories (emotions and all) of some of his Peverell ancestors. I would expect he will take teenage drama less seriously when he has memories of parenting teenagers, but he still has a 13 year old body and teenage hormones can cause brain malfunctions. Great chapter.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

This chapter was actually pretty interesting. I’m hoping for a closer Harry/Sirius bond, personally. I especially enjoy each character’s characterization; it’s really spot-on while simultaneously expanding into each character. I’m excited to see what’s next.

Jonathan W.

How is Harry able to do magic without the underage sensors going off?