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Now things will start to become more real....

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Will Bonner

Nice start to the summer! Can't wait to see what you do with Isabella.

Lord Peverell

Good to see Ms Nott from the previous story make an appearance here !!

Sunny

That was a nice chapter. I liked the addition of Rosa's descendant and how you wrote Harry's arrival at Headquarters. I look forward where you take the 2nd half of the story. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker.

Kyle Spence

I think this one has the most devolpment of harry yet. We get a larger range of harry that this with rose and flower for the soul really show your improvement.

Orion Nebulous

“Bugger that,” Harry retorted. “I’m not going to be kept in the dark. You will either be transparent with me or the lot of you can piss off.” I think that ever since you wrote Arcturus Black in Honour Thy Blood you've written him, Charlus and Harry, or whoever is a major protagonist, as being very potty-mouthed and rude. I get that he's angry and feel that the adults are wrong to exclude him, and much of the rest of the dialogue wasn't in the same vein, but still... While I enjoy your stories a lot - enough to having supported you for over 2 years and counting! - I for one would love to see a smooth-talking Arcturus who's a great politician who knows how to weigh his words carefully, or a less juvenile sounding Harry (ironic I know, given his age in most stories) who is less hostile, but can still stand up for himself. Just a thought. Keep up the amazing work!

Eric

Well don’t getting rid of Katie. It’s not a very good pairing so now you can use her death to fuel different plot lines without killing off a more important character