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These next few chapters are going to be fun...

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Frank B

Great chapter

Will Bonner

Well that was a quick summer. Can't say I am not disappointed in that it wasn't a bloody summer for the death eaters.

Chesterton

Whoa… a Sirius Black—Count of Monte Cristo story would be amazing. Dumbledore, Crouch, Fudge, Bagnold , Pettigrew serving as the foils. Harry being the kid who eventually becomes the inheritor of the Black wealth…Azkaban=Chateau Dif

Sammy the Shark

Harry James “it’s clobbering time” Potter

Brandon Shilling

I can’t wait to see what Harry does to the pink toad.

Joe Neal

A “hands on sight” Harry is always my personal favourite

rahul kumar

This is setting up to be a very good story.. eagerly awaiting the next installment 🤞

BattleMaster

Great chapter as per usual... not gonna lie was hoping that Harry would take the initiative and take out all the death eaters in Azkaban. At least to make it easier for himself and the war

thevolunteer

“He is becoming what he believes he need to be,” Albus said sadly, Needs Great chapter, I hope Pomfrey leaves some bruises on Malfoy. I’m glad Angelina and Alicia we so good to Harry, I hope Katie’s parents are the same. The Delacour scene was good, and I can’t wait to see what is done Daphne v Gabrielle

Sunny

A fantastic chapter. I do wish Harry would be more open with someone, i.e. talk about his summer fights. Hermione and Ron need to force it out of him. Sirius is defo gonna make Harry his heir, but it would be nice to see Sirius have a child. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Orion Nebulous

Love the agency you've given Barty Jr in this story. His fanaticism and devotion actually cause him to work against the Dark Lord's wishes, but a deranged mind like his can't really tell. I wonder if Voldemort will ever find out!

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

This was an amazing chapter. I enjoyed reading Harry putting Draco in place. I can’t wait to see him inevitably do the same to Umbridge.

Celexs

So much happened in this chapter, I am greatly enjoying the pacing of this one and look forward to every chapter.

Kugleburg

I hope Harry doesn't remain passive and reactionary for long. It really felt like the third task end was leading up to a John Wick / Death Wish style retaliation, but then we seem to have calmed back down into rational thinking. Hopefully things start to take a twist again cause the last thing I want to see is an idiot like Umbridge being an actual villain or Dumbledore hiding things for "Harry's own good" yet again. I didn't realize how much I actually wanted twisted evil Barty inadvertently creating Voldemort's worst enemy until this story.

Ellen E. Paris

I see a lot of troubles in Dolores's near future... 😈 And I can't see how she will be abble to stay an entire year with this strong minded Harry to deal with. On the other hand, I have a question : where the hell is Luna?! 😅