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A nice happy chapter for everyone today...

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Harharryhar

Nice Chapter but Dumbledore has been made to be a bit too weak

Rodrigo Méndez

I thought the chapter was short, but it was just my anxiety to read it all in the least possible time

Gummyking2

So good, might be your best story yet. Definitely up there with flower for your soul imo

Don Ours

Amazing chapter! Harry openly using his abilities to save Dumbledore was great

E. Machado

I'm sad that Bones died, she seems to die in most of your fics. Maybe you can do a Harry/Susan pairing where she lives in the future

Michael scott

Agree Dumbledore should be stronger. But still good. With Bones and the rest dead, no way Fudge will believe it was Tom. He wont trust what Dumbledore says

Ryan

People please stop posting spoilers in the comments. I rather enjoy reading a new chapter without any outside insights to what will happen.

FBX17

I just cover the lower half of my screen - should work for everyone except Mad-Eye.

Draco Pendragon

Enjoyable chapter. Just wish Amelia hadn't died. I kinda enjoy her character in most stories.

Abhishek Kumar

Since so many have given the spoiler already, I want to just say that I want a Harry/Amelia story now, since you write good time travel stories. It could even be a future Harry coming back to 4th-5th year, because that's a variant of time travel you haven't done...

Rick Malone

I like to think I’m not a bloodthirsty individual, but I was glad to see Harry come to the realization he did about offing the Death Eaters in Azkaban. Why? Because it makes sense! He’s literally fighting pretty much a one man war right now - he needs to take advantage of whatever breaks he finds. Plus I thought you did a nice job of his internal justification. Charlus is a good man, but he can make the kind of proclamations he did because the war he fought in was away from home.

Kugleburg

Thanks for the happy chapter.

Alex Lafrance

can't wait for it, it is excellent stuff haha

Sunny

On Harry's dilemma, I have to agree with Charlus who said it best, that it's not on Harry to think it's all on him. Harry may think his intentions are true, but where does it stop? Also, i do hope that Harry agrees to be part of the DA, as it takes the story back to Hogwarts and involves a greater proportion of the characters, who have been characterized really well with no bashing. I do have to echo what @Harharryhar and @Michael_scott said, that the drop in Dumbledore's ability in what he needed to do in that situation seemed strange, considering he's considered to be one of the greatest wizards in HP lore. The situation didn't seem to be no win one. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Will Bonner

Poor Amelia. What a great chapter, though... glad he is finally being proactive. I do find it hard to believe that Dumbledore + Amelia + Many Aurors + All of Azkabans Cover + Harrys Res Stone Warriors + the advantage of cover is unable to hold of Voldemort and 40 Death Eater. At least Harry did what needed to be done from what it looks like.

Will Bonner

With Bones... at first glance I thought you were mentioning me.

John

This is one of few chapters that have ever been a real disappointment. Given the situation as described, Voldie might well have been able top drive off the defenders but not without losing the VAST majority of the death eaters with him. Between that and the loss of ALL the most faithful except for Crouch, the whole tempo of things should have been altered. It will be interesting to see where the deus ex machina loss is leading things.