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The Sword of the Winter Rose - Chapter II (Patreon)

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2023-07-31 19:45:26
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2026-06
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We will soon be heading for Harrenhal and so forth... There are may characters we will meet on the journey there and before... Some very fun chapters coming up including the next

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Gummyking2

Sorry if you’ve said it before, but is there a posting schedule for this fic like your HP ones?

thevolunteer

Seems a bit OOC for Roberts behavior. I can’t recall him ever having anything against bastards. And Rickard bringing Jon in to his council this early is wild. The are you decent bit with Jon and Lyanna makes me feel like it’s been a bit of a problem before lol

Snewp

I’ll be honest, I’d definitely prefer the Starks and the Baratheons to not have a falling out. But if that’s what’s required so that Lyanna doesn’t marry Robert, so be it

Sunny

I would like if Robert isn't bashed. He's a flawed character in canon, but I feel he's definitely redeemable. I'm not sure where Jon's strength has come from, unless it's something you've added in. Overall, I enjoyed the chapter and Jon's characterization so far. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Celexs

I am really enjoying this story so far, every chapter makes me want the next one immediately.

SirSmellsALot

I think ASOIAF suits your writing style far better than HP, from what I've read. The universe doesn't let gritty stories you seem to prefer feel out of place, something that is the case with HP. I look forward to seeing how you handle the wider scope of ASOIAF.

Roy

Great chapter!

V_Arko

Awesome chapter Lee!

Superjas

Im so excited for this story!

AlexanderR

I think Robert's dislike of Jon is more due to the closeness he seems to have with Lyanna. And Robert already seems to have developed an infatuation with her. I think that's pretty spot on for Robert's character. From the TV show and some other stories, it seems like he makes friends easily, but he's also happy to insult people to their faces or make it clear he doesn't like them. He might be redeemable in some way, but probably still not a good idea for him to be married to Lyanna or for him to become king of Westeros. His marriage to Cersei shows he likely wouldn't be faithful to Lyanna, and I doubt he truly loved her based on a few short interactions. That said, with Jon's involvement, I'm curious if there is some room for growth for a number of characters.

Thor

So great! Im really looking forwart to Harrenhall and I bet Robert will challenge Jon before the end of the evening after some more ales.

Francis

Really enjoying this looking forward to see who the pairing will be I'm hoping jon doesnt tell anyone that he is from the future tbh an also hoping for a jon x lyanna as we all no he isnt above a but of incest 😂

Trent Roe

This is gonna be great!!!

Guv

Will this get posted on the website? It tends to be a nicer reading experience than the word docs

Chesterton

Download it and open it in another app like notes. I use speechify and have it read. It’s really nice

Hashim Saeed

What’s the update schedule for this story?

Francis

Would also like to know this as well

Will

Pls update soon

Alex Lafrance

he said in a previous post that he wants to post one chapter per week, but he don't have a schedule.

Mark Travis

Thought this was once a week been 7 days

Will

Btw I am begging you, kill lyanna, kill jon, kill Ned, kill anyone but please don't kill ghost

stevem1

Another great chapter. The plot thickens toward the south, Robert arrives, and presents as the oaf he is. I wonder if Tully’s offer and Robert’s arrival are coordinated?