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Eyyy it's nice when a rough draft comes together into a nice page! I'm getting less afraid of negative space, I think it's good for pacing the panels. 

Jesse has an ass that looks real good in tight jeans, too 

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Sieg Black

That must have been like a punch to the gut for the guy!

J Olson

I love Aaron’s “oh fuck!” expression in the bottom panel. Waiting for him to make a clear decision. The right one!

BigBadWolfbear

First I want to say that I really like Jesse, but if you like somebody, you would have to be honest with them, and you would have to ask at a certain point do you think it's fair or responsible to parade yourself around and entice somebody that you like a lot, and offer yourself to them, and at the same time give them ultimatums of what you want? Asking questions like this really helps signify that the story is written very well, and in some ways can reflect on real life decisions and actions that people have when dealing with relationships.

J Olson

Also? Aaron hasn't had his shower yet. The pheromones and post-sex funk are going to be overwhelming. ;)