Move it, Football Head! (Patreon)

Can you see the difference?

Most of the early changes I'm making are fixing the way I drew Annie. I had a vision in mind of drawing a kind of abstract character, like something I'd see in Dexters Lab, Powerpuff Girls, and other cartoons I loved at the time. The problem was, I wasn't really experienced in drawing like that!

Hopefully this first page of the comic shows the difference a few lines can make. Annie is still the same character, and despite her cranium being a little more regularly shaped, she still has a bit of a football head.

The rest of the art is largely untouched, but I'll share anything that I'm changing, or stuff that was just objectively incorrect.

You might also notice I toned down the amount of bold text I used in the beginning too. It was something else I thought was needed at the time to emphasize character voice.