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Here are some more updated pages. The changes are still pretty small, because I'm not looking to change the style of the comic. Even though Kat and Willie both look pretty different from their current appearance in the story, Annie is the one I felt needed most work in the early pages. The new volume is close to finished, and I’m looking forward to showing more in the coming weeks and months!

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Carl Fink

I'm actually curious about the lettering. Removing all the emphasis--is that meant to let the reader invent our own "sound" for the dialogue?

Quasitling

Odd that the original images of William in the last panel of the first page and the 2nd panel of the 2nd page look almost identical, yet you only modified the latter, not the former.

Brian Harvey

There was some argument about the boldface when Tom posted the first redone sample. But on this page I'm perfectly happy to see "study hall" in lightface. :)

Koda

I love the rounder shapes, but I kinda miss the death glare of the lower left panel :D