Rune's Day 4 (Patreon)

Hi folks!

I wanted to ask you how do you feel about the very ending of Rune's day 4. Mild spoilers for anyone who hasn't read it yet!

The end of the day sees Arvo and Rune in one bed, and as the very last thing, Rune gives Arvo a kiss. I intentionally cut at that moment to leave space for the readers to imagine the scene beyond the illustration and the narration, to put themselves in Arvo's shoes more than a description would allow to. There are also other scenes that will follow, with more proper displays of emotions, that I'd like to describe in more detail.

With all that in mind, I wanted to ask how do you feel about the scene? Do you think it should be expanded, or left as is?