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Cleaning time!

30: I really struggled with how to make this scene. I hope it's clear, but maybe I should have removed Vrie's dress for reader clarity. I should have also taken the camera back a bit.

31: When making this scene, I was surprised how much Vrie's boobs really did prevent her from reaching.

32: I was planning to put a sheen over the kitchen to show how clean it was, but it proved really annoying and I didn't think it was worth the hassle. Besides, does that kitchen look dirty, I don't think so.

33: Buni looks huge here, but remember, she's only 160cm right now.

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Rotom

Opposite of earlier, should probably say this energy to there for this one. It's clear enough, but yeah camera back more would have helped! 32 the kitchen doesn't look dirty, but your note does. You forgot the question mark mister. They have a peace and love sign, time to burn the place down. I feel like a ~ would fit better than the ... after you. ~ tends to indicate a singsong tone which is very much what the wording feels like. Also girl sleeping in a hella uncomfortable position. Her neck is capital F FUCKED. Sorry for your loss Bun.

BUSCUIT Industries

Minor grammar mistake. I must perish. I've never thought about using ~ for that, but I probably should. I'm so used to the ...