GNM3m update: 34-37 (Patreon)

I really debated if today would be 3 or 4 pages released, but I chose 4 because I feel it'll make Monday's release more satisfying.

34: "Fuck around and find out" is one of my favorite quips, so I use it in my stories maybe more than I should. I guess it's like a "signature detail" of mine. There are others, as well. I wonder if anyone has noticed them?

35: The second half of this panel isn't quite where I'd like the dialogue to be. Aside from Vrie's floating text box, I don't feel the order of the dialogue is as clear as it should be. I put a lot of effort into making my panels clear for what order each character is talking in. But sometimes, the angle of the image means I would otherwise have to cover something important and I have to make that decision to compromise the text position. Hopefully people can still understand this is Buni-Vrie-Buni.

36: I like Buni's expressions here. Also, starting with this comic, I want to make Buni's dialogue more "authentic" to who she is. That is to say, an urbanite. I'd like her to speak less formal, less grammatically correct, more slang, etc. I don't want her to come off as dumb and I don't want to imply I think people that live in cities are dumb. Just using a different dialect. Buni is from the streets of what is essentially New York City.

37: Couldn't fit this above, so I'll mention that I find it a little humorous how pear-shaped Vrie looks with her big ass and no boobs. In hind sight, I should have found a reason to remove her dress to show off that dumptruck she has right now, but I'll talk more about that later in the comic...