ARD2 page 34 poll
- Jylu 6
- Stepr 1
- Drec 0
- Jeune 0
- Myamy 2
- No one 0
Unknowingly, April has been called to the stage. Should she stick with one of the other girls? If so, who?
This was the first time in doing ARD2 that I wasn't sure I'd make the deadline. I just had a very busy week irl. I'd like to think you all would understand if I had to delay it, but I managed to get it done without too much stress, and that's important. That said, there's a few dumb mistakes in these panels. Not my best work.
030: April is not supposed to look like she's recoiling in disgust. To be fair, this wasn't a problem with the page creation. I think I should adjust her expressions a bit.Also, terrible formatting with so much dead space on the left.
031: Not a lot to say here. This page came together nicely.
032: Again with the bad formatting. It's all way too zoomed in. But this is something I need to work on in general.Also, you guys voted to have April be honest, but she still needs to avoid revealing her special powers. I had to be creative with her dialogue.
033: Introducing everyone's favorite new character, Doory the talking door! Ok, no. I just didn't want a man entering the dressing room (at least not right now).Febry's legs are slightly bent here and it bothers me a little. But oh well.
034: Ok, I am sorry. This page sucks. I had some major technical problems right as I was doing this, and instead of redoing a bunch of work, I just had to ship it out. If I didn't, I wasn't sure I could get this out on-time. The trade-off is that the girls look like damn robots with their boring walking poses. Sorry about this one.
But I did get it done on time! So get those votes in!