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Elric didn't like how the priest was looking at Arielle. He didn’t like it one bit. 

He didn’t know what it was that caught the man’s attention, because Arielle had performed that test as well as she could. She’d given herself the right amount of speed, and she’d failed enough times to be believable. She had been averagely exceptional. 

Yet, something had shifted in the man’s expression. He’d been focused on her the entire time, and when Elric had glanced over, there was a hint of a smile at the corner of his lips.

There might be a hidden part of the test that Elric hadn't noticed. Or maybe the man had extra insight and could see into Arielle’s cores already. But if he could, there would be no need for the test. He would already be able to tell how overdeveloped her cores were, plus the extra core that she kept hidden.

Only one way to find out.

As the man turned, heading toward one of the doors, Lord Antigones called out, “Wait just a moment. What is the meaning of this? Why must this final test be performed in secret, away from us?"

“And what did you mean when you said she has the most exceptional cores you’ve ever seen?” Master Cullen said. “I’m sure the girl is skilled but…surely you’ve seen better?”

Elric winced.

That was the exact type of statement that would get Arielle in trouble, and he really wished that the Priest had not expressed that, especially in front of the council members.

The fact that he had done it, even knowing Elric wanted to keep the truth about Arielle's cores from the rest of the council, could only mean one thing.

It was a threat. 

If Elric refused to go along with him, he would give more hints as to the true nature of Arielle’s abilities. Perhaps enough to earn her a suppression.

Right now, he didn’t seem inclined to answer any of the questions and simply continued walking until he reached a door. He stopped then and gave Elric a questioning look.

“What is going on here, Elric?” Lord Antigones asked.

Elric shook his head. “I’m not sure. I guess I’ll find out and let you know.”

Lord Antigones held his gaze. Clearly, he knew there was more to this than met the eye, because of the head priest's assertion that Elric did not want the rest of the test out in the open.

Elric only gave him a harmless smile.  

Meanwhile, Arielle had trekked down from the altar and was now standing next to him, giving him her signature questioning look. The trust in her gaze sometimes scared him. It reminded him of how much she didn’t know, and how much she relied on him to navigate this new world of theirs.

If he made a mistake, if he steered her wrong…

It would be over for her, and it would all be his fault.

He looked up and met Gio’s gaze once more. Gio looked relaxed, leaning on one foot, with his arms crossed, as though he didn't have a care in the world. But he'd also seemed relaxed while fighting a legion of demons. 

That was the thing about Gio: one could never predict when he was ready to pounce.

Or perhaps he always was.

Elric wondered if he truly would try to break Arielle out of here, if need be. 

Gio was the type to want chaos for chaos's sake, and that made him prone to taking on fights that he really did not have to. Not to mention he was still curious about Arielle, if nothing else, and he might believe he had enough social standing to get away with a jailbreak.

But a suppression on someone like Gio would be torturous. It would be an instant death sentence.

Would he be willing to give his life for Arielle?

Gio smirked and gave a subtle tip of his chin that could have been a nod or a dare.

Elric wasn't sure if Gio was answering the question he'd only posed mentally, and he also wasn't sure if he believed him. He had his own agenda, after all.

Nevertheless, Elric took Arielle by the shoulder. Together, they followed the man through the doors. 

The hallways were darkened, the only light coming from small, flickering spirit lanterns held in the hands of the statues that were half-melted into the wall. They were disciples and guardians and various helpers of the Primordials. Arielle stared at them with keen interest as they walked by, and Elric wondered if it was because she was admiring the statues themselves or if there were essences that she could see.

They finally reached the end where a staircase led downwards.

An immediate ghostly draft made Elric shiver, like phantom hands were trailing the back of his neck. The lower they went, the colder and staler the air got, the sounds of their footsteps echoing.

At the bottom, they were led through another hallway with stone walls that resembled that of a cave, and standing coffins lining the way. At the end, an eyeless maiden was carved from granite, her hand out, her mouth opened in a half-scream. Upon reaching her, the head priest touched the tip of her finger, and stone walls shifted aside to reveal a door that opened automatically.

The crypt had low vaulted ceilings, with heavy columns and checkered floors. Crystals dotted the walls, forming different constellations.

There were also several robed priests in the room, who did not look up at their arrival. They continued their tasks, some sitting on benches and praying, others kneeling and meditating over the crystals. They were those who were wiping the floor with a rag in straight lines, others standing in circles with their hands extended, a glow emanating from their bodies.

Elric jerked as, without warning, they all rose and immediately moved in tandem as though obeying a silent order. 

It was a little disconcerting to watch their coordination, as though they were all following a script that was only known to them.

Five of them began to touch the crystals, muttering to themselves, causing them to glow. Twelve stood in a star, a circle and a triangular configuration, and began to hum.

The ground where the altar should be peeled away, and a star-like contraption rose from it. It had leather harnesses with buckles at the tips, and they snapped open once it was done rising.

"What on earth is this place?” Elric murmured, and he half expected the other priest not to answer, but he turned around. 

“This is the final testing room,” he answered, which gave Elric exactly nothing. "It is where we will see if indeed she is what I think she is.”

Elric's heart skipped a beat, but he maintained an unaffected tone as he asked, “And what do you think she is?”

“An anomaly,” he said.  “A hybrid I’ve never encountered before.”

Elric’s stomach tightened. He glanced around the room at all the robed individuals; none of them seemed to be paying particular attention to their conversation. They had their eyes closed, continuing their chant. 

“She’s a human," Elric said in a low tone.

“I didn’t say otherwise,” he said, shrugging. “She is mostly human, but there might be something else within her. I’ve never seen another human with cores like that. Most with anomalous cores tend to be hybrid in nature, so I’m assuming she is too.”

“Anomalous?” Ellric said. “What do you mean? I thought her cores were simply overdeveloped.”

“They are. But it is why they are overdeveloped that we must pay attention to. They are far too refined for her age. Even if she trained all her life, they should not be that refined, especially without help from the system. They are not attached to any external oaths or rituals either. Her cores are a natural consequence of what she is, but what that is…I’ll need to investigate more to know.”

"I see." Elric remembered the rumors about Mossbornes being hybrids. Of course, he’d never believed in such a thing. It was just another excuse for small-minded snobs to mark them as savages, as less than human thanks to their strength and endurance.

But now he wondered...

Arielle was a Mossborne. She was not adopted. Her mother had insisted that she gave birth to Arielle herself, and Elric had no reason not to believe her. Besides, while she didn’t bear a strong resemblance to her parents, there was enough of them in her to signify a blood relation.

However, no Mossborne had ever had what Ari did. On the contrary, Mossbornes did not foster magic well at all, and those that did tended to lose their powers as they aged.

So why hadn't the same thing happened to Arielle? Why had her cores grown stronger? Why could she see essences when that was a skill only the very ancients were rumored to have?

“I see you’re curious about her too,” the man said, and Elric instantly snapped into himself. 

He cleared his throat. "I just...I think you might be mistaken. Is it just the refinement that makes them anomalous?”

“No. To explain in detail, I would have to share decades of research and explain the nature of the cores and how they develop in human bodies. The overdevelopment is just one sign. The other one that interests me is that her cores are also far too active, and seem in constant motion. Most humans have static cores that only act whenever they’re interacting with a spell. Hers are not like that. I’ll need to understand why.”

He gestured to the black contraption where some of the priests were waiting. 

Alarm shot through Elric.

“You want her to get in that?”

“Yes,” he said simply.

The thing looked like a torture device, with so many restraints that it made him anxious.

Arielle stared at him. Once more, he was reminded of the fact that she was entrusting her entire life to him. 

"Are you certain there's no other way?" Elric asked.

"I'm certain."

“If anything happens to her…”

“Do not worry,” the priest said. “No harm will come to her. She simply must perform the test as genuinely as she can. And I will know if she’s faking it by deliberately reducing her ability to trick me. That is unacceptable, mage. Do you understand?"

Elric held his gaze, studying the arch of his eyebrow, and the quiet threat of his tone. 

Dismay sank in his gut. It was just as he feared. The head priest knew that Arielle had faked her results and knew that she had failed on purpose.

One word from him and her life could be over.

He turned to Arielle once more, and she was once again looking at him in question. 

Elric nodded. 

With a quickening pulse, he watched Arielle step up into the contraption, holding her hands out so that the manacles could be buckled around her wrists and elbows. She looked fairly concerned, worry furrowing her eyebrows, but she let them strap her in anyway, compliant even after they stepped back outside of the circle etched in the ground.

At least the leather didn't look particularly strong. Elric could probably break it with a variety of spells.

He glanced over at the exit and thought of the possibility of his having to break Arielle's confinement and run with her if things looked like they would go south. His brain ran through a few scenarios, and he stood near the head priest, just in case he had to take the man hostage for their escape. He didn’t know the head priest’s true ability, seeing as how he was good at shielding it, but he talked with too much confidence and audacity to be truly powerless.

Nevertheless, self-preservation could make anyone compliant enough, provided Elric could figure out what it was that the man was afraid of. 

Alternatively, he could simply hold the other man in this room for long enough for Arielle to escape and find Gio. 

Hopefully, between him and Vittoria, they could get Ari somewhere safe, somewhere that they couldn't reach her.

Elric knew that if he went that route, that would be the end of his life.

But there were worse reasons to die.

***

Arielle wished she knew what was happening.

Apart from the restraints around her wrists and ankles, there were several Vacu elements in the room that made her nervous. Not to mention the glowing crystals that caused Luxa to hover over them, with more probably buried in the shiny black stone walls of the cathedral.

It reminded her of the core stabilization trial she'd had with Llywyd.

She wondered if that was what this test was.

It was hard to tell even as the crystals' glow intensified. Most of the orbs controlling the spell were hidden in the very walls so Arielle could not break them easily. The priests began to chant in tandem, in a language she did not understand. The scent of incense and mist filled the room.

The free essences around her began to float farther and farther away from her. 

It is like the core stabilization trial, she thought with relief.

"Form any of the master-tier spells that you did earlier," the head priest called out.

Arielle looked to Elric.

Technically, she should not be able to form that spell without a wand and especially not with her hands restrained. Yet, she knew she could even with the orbs at the other side of the room.

She wouldn't do it if Elric told her not to.

She saw his jaw clench, but ultimately, he nodded.

She reached out and grabbed the essences with her gaze, forming the shape of the master tier golem spell.

But then something happened.

A sharp pain spiked inside, and her cores withered suddenly, triggering an ache like nothing she'd ever felt.

Arielle screamed. 

"What is this?" She heard Elric demand, but her vision unfocused at the pain of her cores being crushed under phantom hands. She fought back, struggling against her bonds, trying to prevent the inevitable. 

Was this it? Was she being suppressed?

It hurt. 

It wasn’t like Llywyd's test at all. That was mere discomfort compared to this. This made her feel trapped, like something was being ripped out of her. Her cores were getting smaller and smaller, contracting even as they tried to expand once more. It was a pain that was difficult to describe, an ache, an infernal itch, a bone-deep discomfort as though her very being was being torn into, things being taken out of her without her permission.

As tears leaked out of the corners of her eyes, she watched Elric attempt to cast a spell, but the orbs stayed in place. They did not move, likely restricted by one of the spells that the priests were chanting.

Elric bolted for her, but some of the priests moved to stand in his way. He grabbed two of them by their necks and tossed them away like sacks of potatoes.

While that happened, Arielle thought of an escape spell. Something that could get her out before her cores were gone completely. 

She breathed through the pain and panic and searched her mind. Fear clouded her judgment, making it harder for her to figure out a spell that would get her through this. Something simple that she could cast with a smaller core.

Something that would set her free.

[Air Slice].

With a strain that made her veins pop out in her forehead, and her eyeballs ache, she reached out for the orbs, even as she saw Elric grab the Head Priest and shove him against the wall. A dagger flashed in his hand, and he pressed it against the man's throat.

"Release her," he demanded. "Now."

"Or what?" The priest asked. "You'll kill an old man?"

"Don't tempt me. What are you doing to her? This is not how a core suppression is done, so why are you torturing her?”“How would you know how a core suppression is done? Have you ever gotten one before?”

Elric’s voice was heated. “I know you think you’re untouchable because of your role in the system.  I know you believe you’re a titan. But you’re not a stupid man. There are six masters out there, who know that we're here. One of them is the strongest Archmage in the world, and quite famously a loose cannon. And he’s quite fond of the girl that you’re currently torturing? Do you think you’re going to get away with it? Do you think you’re that irreplaceable? Do you think your word carries more weight than that of eight of the council who could very well vote another to take your place ? We can at the very least, make things very inconvenient for you for the next few years? I’m sure you don’t want constant council checks do you?”

The priest did not respond and continued to stare at Arielle. 

“You may be strong, but you are human. So I’m going to give you five seconds to stop whatever it is you’re doing.”

“Make it twenty seconds,” the man said. “If it goes on past that, then I will consider releasing her.”

Twenty seconds? Arielle didn’t think she could last that long.

Also if Elric killed him, what would happen?

Would he be imprisoned? Would his cores be suppressed?

Arielle could not allow him to undergo something this horrific.

It took her a lot of effort to reach out to the orbs, but she had learned to do so in hell.

In the abyss, it had been even harder, and she'd been in pain then too, yet she'd done it regardless. Right now, she gasped for air while she grabbed them, the orbs trembling against her hold, yet somehow letting her form the spell and putting up no resistance as they had done for Elric.

It was made easier by the fact that [Air Slice] was a spell in her system Grimoire. It required less concentration from her, and it came together much faster and easier.

"[Air Slice]," she gasped.

It sliced her bonds open, and she dropped to the floor and crawled as quickly as she could away from the altar and the surrounding circle.

Once she escaped, her cores returned in a rush, growing to their normal size. She collapsed and coughed, hugging herself and rocking through the panic.

"Arielle!" Elric rushed toward her, picking her up off the floor. He hugged her, and his scent of earth was a steadying presence, one that grounded her and made it easier to breathe. She clutched him as the head priest moved into her view once more.

He raised his hand, and Arielle's energy and vitality increased. Her panic subsided significantly, and warmth rushed through her body, restoring everything back to its normal strength.

She actually felt a little better than when she'd walked in here. Physically anyway. Mentally, she was broken up. 

But also, she wondered how the priest could use magic when all the other magical components in the room had been restricted. None of the orbs had shifted from their positions. There had to be some other magic he was tapping into, some hidden battery or well. 

As Arielle kicked her feet to be released from Elric’s hold, her fascination poked through her horror at what just happened.

Elric, on the other hand, glared at the man and put her behind him.

"The aftereffects should only last for a few minutes,” the head priest said. “And eventually she will build a tolerance. Next time it won't be as bad.”

“Next time?" Elric gave him an incredulous look. “You must be crazy to think you’re going to get to do it again.”

“You won't have a choice,” he said. “Unless you want the dear council to know about her other peculiarities, including the curious little spare core she's harboring.”

Elric's nose flared. His face turned red. She didn't think she'd ever seen him look that angry, not even that one time he'd attacked the dean in the office.

The head priest did not seem to care, although the front of his robe was rumpled, and there was a single drop of blood on his neck where Elric had nicked him with the dagger.

"What I could do now," he continued. "Is to  tell them that she has truly remarkable cores, worthy of being a great master in her own right, and eventually an Archmage, but, there's nothing truly suspicious about her or the way she developed them. I could tell them that she will not be a threat to the High Ascendant. Or I could tell them the truth."

"Why would you hide it?" Elric asked.

"Because she is more useful to me exactly as she is, without her cores altered in any way," he said. "I’m not a biologist, but her cores are the way they are for a reason." He looked at her. "I’m sure you know this story, but a long time ago, when the first Earth was destroyed, humans were sent to another Earth, one that they were meant to populate and rule with their magic. However, it is said that the earth was already occupied by another species when we got here. And those already had their own magical abilities. More than that, they could produce magic."

That rendered Elric silent. Arielle too.

"Are you saying..."

"I don’t know if perhaps she is a hybrid with one of those earlier species, or if there’s another reason, perhaps a genetic abnormality that causes her to resemble them in this way. That’s for a biologist to decide. What I know is that the major problem of our world is that there are no avenues for us to produce magic, and we must rely on what is here and what is siphoned," the man continued. "Human cores are different from others, with certain limitations. However, it might just be that we have not yet found a way around it.”

Arielle cocked her head. "I don't understand."

“Your cores are hyperactive even at rest. I pushed them to the limit to see if they would still be that way, and they were. You were able to create a spell even with everything else working against you. Even with cores that were in the middle of a suppression That’s a sign that perhaps, with some effort, you may be able to do more and we might be able to find a way to extract essences from them."

Elric's jaw slackened. "Are you insane?"

"No," the Priest said. "No, I’m not.”

Arielle remained silent. The dragon she'd met had said that humans did not produce essences because they did not meditate for years like dragons did and were not able to access their spirit path. She wondered if this priest knew that. What he was saying sounded antithetical to it, because it involved pushing herself to the limit, which to her was the exact opposite of meditating on a spirit path. 

If he didn't know, she probably couldn't tell him because then she would have to tell him how she found out. Not to mention she did not like or trust him very much, not after what he'd just done to her.

But if he did think that her cores could produce essences...what exactly did that mean for the spirit path? Would she eventually have to meditate for the rest of her life?

As much as she enjoyed meditation, she didn't think she could do that, and what he was proposing was...distasteful to say the least.

"You want her to become a lab rat," Elric asked, his eyes narrowing, brows lowering.

"That's one way to put it," he said. "Another way is that I want her to become a pioneer of what may become a new system and era of magical prosperity. A productive method of magic rather than a simply extractive one. One where the majority no longer have to suffer."

"And while you're doing so, you will poke and prod until you find out everything there is to know about her cores and how to overcome them. Right?"

The man didn't even flinch at Elric's sardonic tone. He simply effected a casual shrug.

"It is your choice at the end of the day. But I have to tell you it is certainly better than the alternative."

Elric's face went even redder at the blatant blackmail. Menace spat from his gaze, and he seemed to want to strangle the other man.

Yet he was not saying anything to oppose the proposal. Probably because he couldn't.

The head priest knew enough about her to report her to the authorities and have her cores suppressed permanently. And that was something she never wanted to go through. The physical and mental anguish was unbearable, like a hole was missing from the center of her body. She would rather die.

"Is it always going to be like that?" Arielle asked quietly. "If I agree to become a labrat?"

"No," the head priest said. "Sometimes the discomfort will be different. Sometimes it would be better. Sometimes it will be worse."

Arielle swallowed. She could not imagine worse. Even just a few seconds of feeling her cores slip away from her was agony.

But this was the price she had to pay for freedom. And to be fair, Elric had warned her that something horrible might happen if she got caught. She should have stayed with her head low as he'd asked. This was her fault. 

"How often?" she asked. "Will I have to be a lab rat? And for how long?" She hoped it wasn't for the rest of the time.

"Hmm. Perhaps a session or two a month to start with?" he asked. “I do not know how long.”

Arielle's nose flared. 

She didn't like this, but she didn't see much of an alternative. There was no other way out.

"Yes,” Arielle spoke up. “We have a deal."

"Arielle–"

"Good." The priest did not seem triumphant. He seemed resigned as though this were an inevitable conclusion. He held out his hand, his expression flat. "I will swear an oath. And you may call me Father Jade."

Comments

AceHW

Yay new chapter!

AceHW

Most-anticipated new chapter!

Road Rash

I hope this is handled properly, because this whole lab rat arc sounds lame to me.

AceHW

So they need to come back with Vittoria, Gio Li, Elric obviously, and any powerful person who slightly likes Arielle or her abilities but still cares the slightest bit for her wellbeing or knows that torture and/or slavery is a terrible means of trying to get work done.

Jed Wolfgang

I dislike that she has to suffer for the system. Maybe it will have a side benefit of making her stronger so that the High Ascendant is no longer a concern. Being tortured for her “safety” is bull crap. Just because the high ascendant is afraid of being replaced. Vittoria is correct that the system needs to go.

Aqualoon

This didn't really answer anything. The previous two chapters had such build up for nothing.

Dax

ugh, i hate this kind of plot choice

chris salinas

Once again her agency is taken away from her by someone more powerful then her. So lame. Is this what it's always going to be like until she takes the high ascendants place? How about something good happen to Arielle for once?

sotagas

I've been hoping for the ability of Ari to produce her own essences since the dragon interaction. Now we have that as part of the developing story. Lots of directions the story can go now. Keep growing our main character's abilities!

Tatsu

Really not feeling the last few chapters. Ever since the Demons came into the picture, its just one choice after another forced by outside circumstance with mostly just bad and worse outcomes as options. The whole system as a whole only ever serves as a demerit when it should be something to explore with rewards waiting for discoveries. But even here Arielle is recruited against her will and being demoted to a lab rat. The story is slowly but surely turning from a lighthearted OP MC story with some serious moments and a focus on Arielles special personality to a Nobledark setting, pitching Arielle and her Friends against a brutal and unforgiving world. There is even the Demon war on the horizon where she is already being volunteered by the Council after this. There is a desperate need for some wholesome counterbalance and actual rewards going along with services rendered. Always getting the "or else" treatment only builds resentment and frustration.

mezeka

In the end, cant help myself and got some soup. Not what I was expecting. This Father Jade has another motive and unsure if it reflects the High Ascendant’s or if its personal.

Rip Woodham

Um, I feel like things have been as lighthearted as possible for the events with the demons that have happened and Arielle playing a role in them. Sure, nothing like that could have ever happened, and maybe Arielle could have stayed hidden longer. But that has always been the premise of this story - hide, because the system will crush you. And it was obvious since the beginning she wouldn't be able to hide, or grow strong enough in secret before running up against the system. It's already a stretch for things to have worked out as well as they have. Gio is on her side, so is Wesley, etc. Even this head priest - this whole thing worked out as well as it could have.

Stevie Metke

Hypothesis: Mossborne are hybrids between 'druids', 'giants', and humans. The druid part is effectively recessive, usually overwhelmed by the giant part, and, even for those that express it, fades if not exercised extensively when very young. Note: druids from the summoning that the elf did picking her, giants from how the mossborne more commonly are. I may be missremembering the elf chapters, so, time for a reread. It is also possible that druid is the proper term for a human hybrid with whatever it is that has the chance to see essences directly.

Rip Woodham

? You don't think good things have happened to Arielle? Nearly everyone she meets turns into her friend or ally.... even the supposed bad ones... come on.

Nick Holden

Lol based on the feedback, I'm sure you're tempted to have Gio mind control the priest 🤣

Rip Woodham

A trip and a few minutes once or twice a month is not an arc... the arc will probably be her as a master, and everyone coming to terms with that.

Nick Holden

It could be used as a medium for Ari to extract the mechanism behind core suppression.

Evgenii Grishin

Wow, that's rough! Scary and kinda sad. But I hope this will eventually allow Arielle to develop her unique skills and deal with this problem. Damn, this world is so harsh to little girls, but I think she's the main character who will overcome it and change herself and her world.

M. Lampi

Arielle and Elric should give up trying to hide things and instead reveal everything. This could move things in a better direction than going through the pain and agony of core suppression/essence extraction, etc. Edit suggestions: in the middle of a suppression That’s a ==> in the middle of a suppression. That’s a "If I agree to become a labrat?" ==> "If I agree to become a lab rat?"

Evgenii Grishin

​I kinda think everyone (and me) anticipated Arielle just showing off her incredible abilities. But it turned out to be a trope about a mad government scientist who will do whatever it takes to advance his research.

Evgenii Grishin

Maybe she'll develop the ability to make her cores insuppressible.

Dayon Staniger

Oof, it looks like everyones feeling it. Yeah as soon as I finished this chapter I hated this direction ngl. I've dropped stories for less. I don't advocate for changing your story based on readers opinions, but this might be the exception. If this continues id likely just skip this entire arc until it's over. It's a terrible decision mate.

Adam

Lame

Robert Mullins

I'll add on to the pile that I'm really not a fan of where this is heading and am hoping there will be a turnabout of some sort before they leave.

Blackjack

Ouch. I dont like this at all. Not sure what else to say. Still working my feelings out, but ew.

HouseMarket

Loss of agency to me feels like a cheap way to build tension. For all of Eric's talk early on about keeping Arielle safe only for that "safety" to be under the thumb of a mysterious priest. Unless you are the High Ascendant themself, your power or rank mean absolutely nothing. Which I guess is the point of the whole "system upheaval" thing that is going on behind the scenes. Until then, it sucks for Arielle on being a good little child and let other smarter people make the big decisions for her if she knows what's good. Sarcasm of course, peeved at the direction this is going.

Garnet of Flame

You seem to be under the impression that the system is intended to help people. It’s not. It’s a tool to control people enforced by a tyrant god who is terrified of being overthrown. The demerits are the entire point of the system.

BlastYoBoots

“A session or two a month” implies she’ll be otherwise free to live her life with occasional visits here, not an imprisoned arc.

BlastYoBoots

The system that the High Ascendant put into place is the villain of this story. She and everyone else have been suffering because of it, and she almost certainly eventually has to find a way to change it. Even if it means working with people (like Jade) who want to change the system to their own varying, flawed ideals with flawed methods she’ll have to overcome and break to find a better path.

BlastYoBoots

The system that the High Ascendant put into place is the villain of this story. It robs EVERYONE of agency in this world, and it’s been robbing Arielle of the opportunity to be who she naturally is since the very beginning. People will try to control or contain or use her, even those like Jade trying to oppose or replace the system— and sometimes they’ll temporarily succeed, but she’ll overcome them and find a path out that’s better than any of the flawed half-measures and moral compromises they imagined.

BlastYoBoots

The information that the beings who lived here before Earthlings (cough) colonized the place *could produce magic* might indicate that the Primordials are powerful members of that ancient race, perhaps even subjugated somewhat to the purpose of (insufficiently) producing what little Essence the new planet maintains…? Yet another possibility for the Primordial mystery theory pile.

BlastYoBoots

We were given crucial hints, throughout these last two chapters especially, that give us serious new information and possibilities to chew on (the horrific grueling cult the High Ascendant has serving the System’s upkeep, key hints at Jade’s nature and abilities, his setup of the failing-knowledge-tower test and suspicion that Ari could remotely sense and control orbs implying he’d seen the ability before or even HAS it, could even be a “hybrid” himself of one of the original natives of this planet he mentioned, THAT race’s potential ability to produce magic, just the tip of the iceberg here). Lots of implied answers and options, both a narrowing and broadening of possibilities. I’m unsure why exactly you’re unsatisfied… Is it that clear answers weren’t spelled out in plain language? There’s plenty to chew on here, but the chewing takes work, and we haven’t reached the bone yet. Luckily, Arielle has gained a painful path to additional power and answers that she only has to visit twice a month, an opportunity to find a breakthrough via adversity that not even Jade might expect, at a political knifepoint threat that I’d say absolutely cashed in plenty of that dramatic buildup. How was this buildup “for nothing”? :?

BlastYoBoots

Arielle only has to visit twice a month, he said. And a single word to the High Ascendant from Jade means she loses. It’s still a painful deal and she has no choice but to take it, but knowing her, she’ll come out of it with a better hand than Jade expects.

BlastYoBoots

I… really don’t understand the hate? This is a painful deal but I feel like half the commenters missed the bit where she only has to visit for testing *once or twice a month,* not stay trapped there, unless I’ve completely misinterpreted the wording. And it should be equally clear that Jade’s idea of using Arielle as a tool to better the world at her own expense is something she can break through and overcome to find a better path he can’t argue against. That once Arielle has overcome these tests and found deeper power, Jade may end up wishing he’d tried to persuade her to go along with this more willingly, but find himself having burned the bridge and only able to sit on the sidelines to watch as Arielle fixes the world her own way, having robbed himself of the privilege to guide the eventual new shape of things she’ll bring about.

BlastYoBoots

Given the High Ascendant rejected a deal from the Elves to get more essences provided to Earth, I’d put Father Jade’s motives as somewhat transparently opposed to the High Ascendant’s, trying to upend the need for his System but willing to take some cruel-seeming measures to get there and use Arielle as a tool. (In a way that I bet will train new power into Arielle that could make him regret burning the bridge between them by trying to “use” her. He may have to eventually release this leash and let Arielle freely do as she chooses as the only hope for a better way than the High Ascendant, but his methods, his willingness to coerce Arielle and treat her like a tool, may have revoked the privilege he otherwise might have had to guide how she’ll reshape the world, a privilege he might have had if he’d instead come to her with this offer in respect and kindness. It’s like the Dean’s earlier mistake on steroids.)

Dayon Staniger

Does "only" losing your agency as a person once in awhile make losing it less painful to experience? I find your idea rather hopeful, but it's the process by which we get there that no one likes. It's cheap tension, with essentially no redeeming qualities for the arc.

Antony Claughton

That pick up that the elf was summoning a Druid is a really good point.

BlastYoBoots

The agency loss is being capped at a maximum for our sakes. But some of the pain is the point, though: The High Ascendant’s system has been depriving *everyone* in this entire world of agency, even Arielle’s freedom from the very beginning to grow up in a way she likes and be herself. The system that’s depriving her and everyone else of agency is *the villain* of this story. This has hardly been the first time participants in said system, and even in this case those looking to *replace* said system, have successfully coerced her, but any successful coercion of Arielle is temporary. Like the Dean’s mistake, my bet is that it will become a lesson (as these very same trials give her power) that those who perpetuated the cruelty of the system, even in their zeal to use her to overcome it like Jade, will have forfeited the right to shape the more Just future thanks to their cruelty.

Blackjack

Yeah, Blast. Im not sure the point youre making is as strong as you think it is. She is being forced via blackmail to agree to human experimentation. No matter how infrequent, that is a hard pill to swallow. He also says "to start," meaning that its possibly the frequency will increase. Additionally, because its blackmail, he very well could change the terms of their agreement at any point on a whim. Sure, all of us at some level can agree that Arielle will overcome it eventually. However, we still have to read her being abused and essentially tortured for who knows how long until we get there.

Antony Claughton

The high ascendant has always been portrayed as the antagonist. Even if Jade potentially has his own agenda, these are part of the system Ari has been warned about from day 1. She failed the goal of hiding and this is the consequence. Do I like she’s being tortured and tested? No. But it fits with the story and the world. It is key what happens from here though. I don’t think readers will accept too much torture without a bigger response.

Orca

Typos a suppression That’s a a suppression. That’s a (add missing period) worry furrowing her eyebrows, worry furrowing her brow,

Thor Gotschal

I dislike reading about children getting tortured so I hope this is resolved quickly

BlastYoBoots

Again, if it helps, I feel like this is a harsher variant of the Dean’s mistake and will carry with it a similar lesson for Jade: Gaining agency over Ari in the short run, not realizing they’re paying the price of losing agency by losing her trust in the long run. Father Jade is clearly someone who thinks that by forcing “sustainable” cruelty on Arielle, he might overturn the system’s limits and find a better world. But his methods are leveraging AND reenacting the same cruelty the unfair system imposes on Arielle in the first place, and for that crime, he’s doomed to pay a price: After Arielle (likely) makes an unprecedented breakthrough thanks to this testing and Jade can’t risk controlling her anymore if he wants to keep hope alive for a better world, he’s *burned* the bridge of Arielle’s trust, and the price of his cruelty is that he’ll get little say in the nature of the better world Arielle chooses to create. Jade only won in the short term— he’s already lost the long game. He won’t be calling the shots and “making the big decisions for her” for very long, whereas she’d risk everything for allies like Elric who tried their hardest to put her freedom and good treatment ahead of their ambitions or what they selfishly assume is “best” for her or the world. The story has been pretty consistent with that pattern, and I’m betting it will continue to prove itself out in new ways like this. (Gio Li is on The List too, will suffer consequences and loss of agency thanks to how he treated her— I imagine Arielle might even defeat his father to become an Archmage or something of the like, taking his vengeance from him or similarly disarming his ambitions.)

BlastYoBoots

I have a feeling that Gio might not actually hold a candle to Father Jade in a fight. Lucky for us, Jade is chained by his ambitions: once Arielle proves for sure that she can lead to a better world and is no longer willing to put up with his methods (if they even work anymore), Jade won’t be able to report or threaten her anymore or risk quashing that hope.

BlastYoBoots

I understand the fear, and I can’t prove you’re wrong. But I suppose that I trust the author (esp. given the examples of the breakthroughs they’ve given Ari thus far) to have Arielle surpass Jade’s ability to control her much sooner than he guesses. Jade is bound by his ambitions— once Arielle proves for sure that she’s the only hope for a better world and isn’t willing to put up with his crap, Jade will have to abandon the threat of reporting her to HA (and thus any leash on her) or risk the better world he craves never being realized. As soon as he sees any solid proof of the hope he’s craving in Ari (esp. if she becomes too strong to restrain in the process), his threats could dissolve like wet paper. (If he was even serious about carrying through his threats in the first place… and if not, he burned this bridge for nothing but a misguided better-than-thou belief he needed to “force” her onto the right path.)

Hemlock

I love this. Father Jade is a mysterious man who does not seem to fear the High Ascendant, and this all promises answers about cores, hybrids and a path toward bettering magic for Earth 2.0. My initial vibe from Jade was that he's on the level of the Drift, but for some other deity. Maybe he's just a wise scientist. It almost seems like a goal of these "experiments" will build Ari's resistance to core suppression, which is great.

Tanna

I think that's a given considering everything that has been said.

Shaun Greaney

Two really good pickups amongst so much negativity in the comments. Such gems

ZapperGhandi

Blast, you are saying "she only has to visit for testing *once or twice a month,*" that is not the wording used in the chapter: "Hmm. Perhaps a session or two a month to start with?" he asked. “I do not know how long.” Visit implies she will be free to leave and go about her life ~mostly unimpeded, except for the torture sessions. "A session or two a month to start with" could very well mean that she is imprisoned but is only brought from her cell to be tortured upon once or twice a month, to start with. Ari might be forced to remain at this facility at the whims of this guy until he has had his fill. At which point real core suppression isn't off the table.

Allan Miller

I’m going to come out and say I don’t have any issues with where the story is going, and I think haters are going to hate.

Tatiana

Common, just no.