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For some reason, this didn't post correctly before, but it was about six o'clock in the morning by the time I was done so I may have simply not hit save...

Anyway, as you can see, links to the latest builds are available. I've talked about both the new content and some of the changes previously so I will let you all explore that and I'll look forward to your feedback.

Someone expressed a little disappointment at not seeing any immediate sexual activity with Kiki's friends. It's not like the game lacks for girls but there will be some follow up on that.

I noticed a good proportion of people list exclusive content as one of their reasons to become patrons but in previous discussions people have said they'd rather see me moving the story forward than spend a lot of time on peripheral things. One of the incentives I offered early on was for higher-level patrons to name a character or suggest an outfit but nobody's ever taken me up on that.

So I thought I would follow up a little on that topic. I've created a "Patrons Perks" Collection to gather what bonus materials are available - you'll see a link to Collections in the horizontal menu strip near the top of the page.

That said, there's a ton of content in my "To-Do" list" and a fair bit of work for each to happen.

In no particular order:

  • MC moving into the new house

  • The outfitting of the "Play Area" in the basement under the office

  • Major developments with the "Sisterhood", although that's on a timetable so a little way off

  • Maddie's re-development of the Twisted Kilt

  • Advancing the side-stories of some of the secondary characters, especially the receptionists

  • More of the "sex on demand" content, notably with Ashley and Kiki

I'm always glad to hear your opinions. What do you think the priorities should be? Let me know!

Comments

The Amorous Antechinus

I'm a big fan, but I feel that in the last couple of updates you've meandered a little. A while back you got us all excited about joining the club and sharing the girls with a touch of soft S&M thrown in. There was a sense of progression, but now we just seem to be adding more women to the harem, which is probably bursting at the seams as it is. Sometimes less is more, especially if well focused. Personally I'd love to see more in the sharing/swinging space and a touch of submissive/slave women never goes amiss!

Banisher

+1 to this. Well said, mate. Togs, I love your way of sharing your thoughts with us! This keeps me hooked up here even more than the game itself. How about using some more polls, and weighting them for Patron level? This seems to work well for many other creators.

Max Ziegler

I absolutely love it! I think you did a great job and continue to do a great job. I love where the story is going, and I can't wait to see what happens while Kari's gone.

Jukke

I too am looking forward to our next visit to the club, post Kiki surgery.

togs

I think that impression may be exacerbated by the fact that each release is a day, rather than a week. I feel like if you play a week it feels more balanced, but the amount of content means it would be six months between releases! Having said that, it is a lot to cover so I do agree that there may be times when there's a lot of unrelated stuff going on.

Banisher

I used this version to restart playing from day one. Simply love the meaningful dialogue and the development. 5hrs on Autoplay really flew by. But I also realized that in the first 22 days, there are only 3 sex scenes. You could really think into raising this quote. If I was the MC, I would take Ashley on her offer for a weekend together and keep her in bed for one whole day! What do you other guys think of the lewd scenes at the beginning?

Tom

Sorry to say, but i think, you have just lost the story line. The only things i see, is rushing for any wet hole, that needs to be filled. The games getting bored with each progress, without any story behind. the only progress in the game is raising the count of girls with a little blabla between, just to keep the shine up that this game is something with content. The graphics of sexscenes getting better each new day, yes, but i guess that is not enough. 2 girls each day is just to much to keep that game going, nice to see that MC is getting all he wants, but hey, thats not enough for the game to be interesting. I guess it would be a better idea to fill in alot more game content. Edited : 1 month between each Update brings 1 Day in progress. That means it will be 22 years to wait to see the babys of Kara, Kiri etc. ???? Iam buried then but hey, i have seeen sex with a billion of girls around MC

Tom

ANything else than raising his harem would be a very good idea...

togs

I take your point, but there's a lot to come in the near future both in the game and to do with it. As it stands, we are approaching the end of Week 12 in the game, which is almost three months. That's an arbitrary point, but my plan is to transition to where we don't see every single day but more like highlights of MC's time. Anyway, it's probably something I should cover in a regular post but that will be the idea.

Banisher

Thanks a lot for the new version! Now I'm through this version from day 1 to 83. Very interesting so far! My personal PROS: Lois! - OMG, she is probably my personal top love interest I met so far in a VN. She is intelligent, strong, quite resilient, lithe in build and gorgeous beyond belief. But also submissive. Dominating such a girl ist simply the ultimate success. I simply hope you don't let her rack on LM exceed what she had before. Meningfull dialogues - the dialogues make full sense, are mostly captivating and suit the personalities A strong, intelligent and powerfull MC, who is actually not an asshole. Some sort of challenge in the background, keeping some suspense. Could be even more! No money problems! I actually REALLY love Karas statement" I will have your babies. You are handsome, my sisters kisses the earth you walk on, and you are not exactly a starving artist." VERY different girls - In personalities, looks and also intelligence. Also a little bit in kinks. No point & click My personal WEAK spots: Still on daily routine - quite nice at the beginning, but after 80+ occasions of having coffee every morning, driving back and forth, getting expenses every evening, it gets really boring. As a reader, you KNOW that you need to read through the next routine before the next story element or lewd scene can happen... it kills the mood. By now, too many girls. You as our dev, you simply can not spend sufficient times on them all to flesh each one out. And we as readers can not care for them all. BUT: each one of us has his tastes. We are unhappy because OUR favorite sideline girl is getting little attention... Not really a game you can win; more of a threadmill. Less and less romance. At the beginning, there was some romance for Kari and later for Lois. For the latest lewd scenes, romance is almost completely gone. You introduced the "pheromones" as an excuse, and this actually dropped the level of the game. Up to then, the MC worked a little and got his women. In the latest updates, he simply needs to be there. This was especially true on Chloe or officer Jane. Short lewd scenes For me, the scenes lack: - different camera perspectives (wide, close-up, side, back) - changing positions - really captivating dialoge (which works in the rest of the story!), - romance and imersion possibilities, even for Lois and Kari, but especially for Karis sisters. - intimity actually. The MC leaves everywhere to sleep at home! Even after his 1.st sex with a girl! He has no real obligation to to this, making him some sort of coldhearted playboy. I can only speak for me, but I would love to see him savor his conquests. In a nutshel: the scenes are too short for a good fap. Where is the enemy? Starwars is great with Darth Vader. In my oppinion, a real nemesis should unveil himself soon. Some of his actions might already be visible... My very personal summary Keep on the strong dialogues. Keep Lois strong and invaluable for the MCs bussiness. Drop the daily routine and focus on key story elements and lewd scenes. This will also help to keep focus on the main love interests. Bring more romance in the lewd scenes (at least with girlfrieds) and make them longer. To sharpen focus, you could reduce all receptionists and other girls to sex-on-demand. No additional gils, please. With Ashley, Kiki, Vanessa, Silvia you already have real gems waiting to be polished.