Update to Previous Chapters (28 to Epilogue) (Patreon)

Hi, folks. As promised, here's the updated version of the final release for Book 4. I'll try not to do re-posts too often, but I got some great feedback and I wanted to incorporate it.

The changes aren't big, but they make the design of the fortress more realistic, and they correct a few oversights on my part (like how many of Hildra's bondmates have died, or that in the context of the scene, it makes more sense for the portcullis gates to be closed rather than open) and they fix some spots that I deleted during editing but probably shouldn't have (like mentioning that the damage to the stonework was due to the dragon rather than the ravages of time, and that Corec and the others had already considered what to do if Ariadne asked to be bonded).

Progress on the next release continues to run ahead of schedule (even ahead of the schedule I previously posted !), so I'm taking advantage of the momentum. You'll likely see those chapters a little sooner than my previous guess.

--Ivy