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In the first half of the chapter, Duane is the dominant brother. He's the cocksure new officer with a lot to prove and a squad of boys he's trained and is very proud of. But now the ground's figuratively and literally crumbled from beneath him, and Lemuel gets to show him how a soldier is supposed to act even in the blackest of caverns. Lemuel gets angry, Lemuel gets extreme, but Lemuel always knows how to Keep Going. He's going to keep everyone together while Duane recovers. I really enjoy that about this part of the story; it shows how alike they both ultimately are.

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akrasia

Your world is all kinds of fascinating, but Good God, I wouldn't even want to visit without you there to guide and protect me.

Timwez

On the bright side, we know that Will is gonna survive. I do wonder tho, how much difference Lem would have between his 'body-memory' versus the raw, unfiltered khert-memory of this event- would there be as big a gap between reality & remembrance as Duane has?

matt

oOOO 😮