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Dhampir's just gonna bounce for now, don't mind her.

Two character things I really like on this page: Duane and Lemuel do not for one second question going after Will. Of course they're going to go after Will, even if they die trying to save him. There is not a moment of hesitation because they are both at heart decent people intent on a better world - yet at the same time, they left Dhampir no other option but to toss Will. Because they don't respect her they wouldn't verbally engage her, even though that might have deescalated the situation.

If Duane had said: "All right, flee. Drop the boy and you can flee," she would have done so. Instead he immediately disarmed her without knowing what that would result in. Duane talks a lot - way too much! - but he doesn't often listen, or meaningfully engage people he has deemed beneath him. This gets him in trouble a lot even still.

And the other thing is I really like Duane flying Lemuel around and Lem not even ever being fazed by his brother's stupid pymary. It's just some nonsense that Duane does, whatever.

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Cassie

personally, i love that duane does not even bother trying to tell lem that he is not going with him after the big pymary proof lizard. it is DARK in there lemuel. he would NEVER go in there alone. you're coming whether you like it or not.

Timwez

Aww, Shaensigin got bean paws.

Mark

I love that Lemuel recognises that his words do not match the scale of what they're doing. Sometimes you need to be a little flowery

Jeremy Ball

The last time they saw her with a blade to someone's throat it didn't go too well though.