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The third and final day of their training arrived quickly, and if Arien was honest with himself, he felt somewhat disappointed.

Not with Reyna or Harik, the hunter training their group. They were doing everything they could. The problem was that Arien had expected himself to be much better at this.

Books and movies had always made wilderness survival look fairly simple, as though a few lessons about finding water, shelter, and tracks should be enough to awaken some buried ancestral instinct.

For him, at least, even with his high Perception that hadn't been the case

Matt was the only one in their group who could consistently put Harik’s lessons into practice. Arien didn’t know whether it was because of his superior physical fitness, his familiarity with military life from spending his vacations around the army, or some other factor entirely.

The only person performing worse than him in their little group was Missy, a black-haired girl from the minor noble house Tamran. She didn’t seem particularly bothered by it, loudly declaring that such activities were beneath well-born people, while pointedly looking at him, Matt, and Greg, a quiet boy from a village near Wayhold who had spoken perhaps two complete sentences in three days and kept shooting nervous glances toward Reyna and Missy.

“I can’t believe I missed the tracks again,” came Elia’s embarrassed voice. The slender blonde was the last member of their newly formed group, and she somehow managed to outperform Arien despite spending half of her time talking.

“Matt, reveal your secret. How do you do it?” she asked for what had to be the tenth time.

“Elia, Harik explained it dozens of times. You just need to pay attention and look for things that don’t belong in the environment,” Matt replied.

Arien felt a strong urge to throw a spell at him.

A broken branch might stand out if it weren’t lying among hundreds of others.

They had been trekking through the forest for an hour, trying to find the second group, consisting of Reyna, Greg, and Missy, but only Matt seemed to have any idea where they were going.

The conifers stretched in every direction, their closely packed branches blocking much of the sunlight and leaving the ground beneath them cool and dim. The air smelled of resin, damp earth, and old needles, while a thick layer of moss softened their footsteps. Every now and then they crossed a narrow stream or climbed another low hill, only to find exactly the same trees waiting on the other side.

Granted, both groups had been assigned a specific section of forest in which to search for each other, but Arien had long since become hopelessly lost. Every tree, bush, and hill looked identical to him. The only reason he knew which direction was north and which was west was thanks to a rather useful First Circle spell Harik had taught them on the first day. The problem was that even knowing the cardinal directions didn’t tell him where he was relative to the estate or their designated search area.

“Arien, can you hit him with a spell?” Elia asked irritably.

“I really want to,” he admitted mournfully, “but then we’ll definitely lose to Reyna’s group.”

Reyna might not have been as skilled as Matt, but at least she seemed to understand what was going on, which was somewhat embarrassing considering she came from the highest levels of society and, according to every stereotype, ought to have been tripping over her own feet.

“If you keep talking this loudly, we’ll definitely lose,” Matt scolded them while crouching low over the ground.

Arien and Elia exchanged looks and shrugged.

Reyna’s idea of training had been good in theory, but apart from learning a few useful spells, they probably weren’t going to gain much more from this.

Good thing today’s the last day of this stupid trip.

Several hours later, they were the ones fleeing from Reyna’s group. Which was considerably more convenient. They no longer had to constantly search the forest floor for tracks and signs, they only had to avoid leaving any themselves. Or at least avoid leaving obvious ones. Harik could probably point out hundreds of broken twigs, bent blades of grass, or faint footprints left behind by their passage.

So far, the score was tied. Each group had located the other twice. This was supposed to be the final round of the day, so everyone in Arien’s team was giving it their all. No one wanted to see Reyna looking triumphant again.

The prize in their unofficial competition was leadership during the Academy’s upcoming expedition. Though, aside from their red-haired friend, no one seemed particularly invested in winning it.

They were walking through the forest several meters apart when they came upon another clearing. The setting sun hung low between the trees, casting long shadows across the ground, and for once there was no sound except the faint rustle of branches overhead.

A young man sat in the middle with his legs crossed.

Normally, Arien would have turned around immediately and never looked back. Unfortunately, he knew him.

Ramsy Voltorey, Reyna’s older brother by more than a decade, sat perfectly still with his hands resting on his knees. His pale face showed no expression, and his black shirt and trousers only made his long red hair stand out even more sharply. Above his head, a ribbon of fire circled lazily through the air.

They had met him during dinner the previous evening. He had not even bothered to look at them when Reyna introduced them, much to her barely concealed irritation. The red hair was about the only resemblance Arien could find between the siblings.

The three of them stopped at the edge of the clearing, unsure whether they should greet him, walk around, or wait until he noticed them.

“Yeees?” the mage’s irritated voice finally broke their indecision.

They stepped into the clearing and stopped several meters away.

“Greetings, my lord,” Matt said on behalf of the group. “Forgive us for disturbing your rest. We are conducting a training exercise in this area and—”

“And I should leave because a bunch of peasants are trampling through my family’s forest so they can play tag with my sister?” 

The air in the clearing seemed to grow heavier.

“There’s no need to get upset, my lord,” Matt replied through clenched teeth. We’ll be on our way.”

Ramsy laughed coldly. “What times we live in A peasant telling me how I should behave on my own land.”

“I am not a peasant,” Matt said, his face turning red.

Arien was surprised. Surely Ramsy knew who Matt was. Maybe he wasn’t part of the highest aristocracy, but his standing was far from insignificant. Was Reyna’s brother deliberately insulting him?

Arien placed a hand on Matt’s shoulder and spoke quietly. “Come on. There’s no point dragging this out. We’ll withdraw and inform Reyna. Let her deal with it.”

Matt looked at him and slowly nodded, though sparks practically flew from his eyes.

“Ah yes, the son of some little general,” Ramsy said mockingly. “To me, there’s no difference.”

Matt stiffened beneath Arien’s hand. Mana began gathering around him, but before he could cast anything, the fiery whip above Ramsy’s head shot forward.

Matt barely managed to raise a Mana Shield before it struck. The crack echoed through the clearing, and the force of the impact threw him backward into a tree.

He slid to the ground and did not move.

For a second, Arien simply stared.

What...? How...? How did this escalate so suddenly?

Ramsy did not attack again. He stood there smiling, watching Arien as though waiting to see what he would do.

“My lord, please forgive us if we have offended you,” Arien said cautiously. “Allow me to take my friend and disappear from your sight.”

“Much better,” Ramsay said. “Can you believe your friend wanted to attack me? What dreadful manners. You'll testify to that, won't you, peasant?”

“Matt must be tired after the whole day,” Arien replied, slowly backing away until he reached his friend lying beneath the tree.

Fortunately, Matt was still alive, because he let out a faint groan when Arien touched him. He glanced at Elia, who looked completely shocked.

“Elia? Elia!” The girl finally looked at him with terrified eyes. “Go find Reyna,” he said. After a moment, she nodded and ran off into the forest. Thankfully, Ramsy paid her no attention.

“Peasant? You’ll testify that your friend attacked me, won’t you?” Ramsy asked again, his tone almost playful.

Why did he care so much about that? Maybe he realized that he knew he had gone too far?

Matt was a guest of House Voltorey and the son of a prominent military family. Ramsy might have been vastly stronger, but that did not mean he could attack him without consequences.

And now he wanted Arien to testify in his favor.

“My lord, this is all a misunderstanding,” Arien said carefully. “Please allow me to heal my friend, and we’ll leave immediately.”

“No.”

The pressure around Arien intensified until even breathing became uncomfortable. Ramsy had not moved, yet somehow his presence alone seemed to fill the clearing.

“Swear upon your name that you will testify to the truth.”

“I will testify to the truth, my lord,” Arien replied, hiding a smile.

That, at least, would not be difficult. He would happily tell anyone willing to listen exactly what Ramsy had done.

Arien kept his head lowered and his voice respectful, though every “my lord” made his jaw tighten. Matt lay unconscious beside him, and Ramsy was still smiling. Instinctively, he touched the boy and sent a small amount of Life mana into him.

The pressure in the clearing immediately increased.

Arien barely managed to raise a Mana Shield before the whip struck. The impact shattered it and threw him backward, though only by about a few feet.

When the next strike came, he was ready.

Mana Shield was one of those spells they had practiced so often at the Academy that casting it had become almost instinctive. Arien poured as much mana into the next one as he could safely control, and this time the whip bounced from the translucent barrier. A massive chunk of mana vanished from his reserves.

He reinforced the spell once more and looked toward Ramsy, who still stood there wearing that same smile, apparently enjoying himself immensely.

“My lord, please, cease your attack. We are Reyna's guests,” he managed to say before Ramsy lazily flicked his hand and sent the whip at him again.

The next strike was even stronger, and Arien barely kept the shield intact.

Three attacks had already consumed nearly a quarter of his mana. Running was impossible while Matt lay unconscious beside him. He needed another option quickly.

Talking Ramsey down had clearly failed, while fighting him looked almost absurd. Even under the circumstances, he could not help noticing Ramsy’s control.

Flame Whip was only a Third-Circle spell, and Arien could cast it himself, but in Ramsy’s hands it behaved like something alive. He never needed to rebuild the spell between attacks; the whip simply returned to him, ready for the next strike.

Ramsy still wasn’t attacking. He simply watched, looking almost bored.

They said the best defense was a good offense. Right now, that sounded like a bad joke.

Arien looked at Ramsy, then at the Fire Whip twisting under the mage's control like a living snake.

And that smile...

He hated smiles like that.

Arien took a deep breath and reached for his mana, pushing every other thought from his mind.

He launched three Fireballs in quick succession. One veered off course and struck a nearby tree, setting it alight, while the other two flew straight toward Ramsy.

Fireballs were Arien's favorite offensive spell. They were simple, mana-efficient thanks to his assigned Aspect, and devastating enough for most opponents.

Ramsy did not dodge or raise a shield. He flicked one hand twice, almost lazily, as if swatting away mosquitoes, and both Fireballs dispersed before reaching him.

Arien stood there with his mouth hanging open, staring stupidly at the spot where his spell had been.

How?! The Masters at the Academy had never shown them anything like that.

Maybe it was something specific to Fire Magic.

He launched two Earthen Spears at Ramsy.

The man flicked his hand again, and both spells broke apart before they reached him.

Apparently not.

The next crack of the Flame Whip forced him back into motion. He raised an Earth Wall just in time, and the spell shattered it into fragments.

Then he poured nearly half of his remaining mana into a veritable barrage of Fireballs, launching them one after another. Most flew toward Ramsy, though several smashed into nearby trees instead. Roaring flames poured from the spell, engulfing dry bark and leaves.

Ramsy dispelled them one after another until only the final Fireball remained. This time, instead of destroying it, he extended both hands. The air shimmered around the spell, and somehow the Fireball slowed between his palms.

He caught it.

A delighted grin spread across Ramsy’s face before he threw the spell back.

Arien barely had time to process what he had seen. Ramsy had taken a spell shaped from someone else’s mana, seized control of it, and returned it as casually as if Arien had tossed him a ball.

That's impossible. 

All those years of training. All those countless hours studying and practicing. Only to die the very moment he first witnessed what true magic actually was. 

His own Fireball crashed against the Mana Shield. The interaction between the two spells felt strangely wrong, as though the mana resisted itself on contact, but Arien had no time to examine it.

He had almost nothing left, and Ramsy was already preparing another attack. Arien looked around at the burning forest. Well, at least part of his plan worked. His gaze drifted toward Matt. Why did the boy have to be so big?

Damn it. Time to leave.

"RAMSY!"

The shout came from the trees just as a man in black robes rushed past Arien and threw both arms forward. One of Reyna’s bodyguards.

Out of nowhere, an enormous wall of water appeared. The liquid seemed to possess the consistency of jelly. It caught the Flame Whip. The spell became trapped inside, unable either to break through or escape. Moments later, it began dissolving. 

Arien let out a breath of relief.

Oh, the cavalry has arrived.

Reyna emerged from the trees marching straight toward her brother.

The danger had passed, and the exhaustion Arien had been holding back hit him all at once. His legs gave way, dropping him onto the forest floor. Never before had he burned through so much mana in such a short span of time.

He sat there without moving, watching Reyna yell at her brother while Ramsy stood there with the same faint smile, completely ignoring her. Eventually, he gave Arien and Matt one last look before walking away. With a single wave of his hand, the burning plants around the clearing went out at once.

What level is he? And how can someone that insufferable be so strong?

Arien stared at the man’s retreating back. Ramsy had shown him magic that had never even been mentioned in their textbooks.

Something about this did not fit.

Only then did another thought occur to him.

Was that some kind of test?

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Comments

Sammot

I feel like the life affinity has been a bit one tone for now, like couldnt life be used to really do a lot of damage too? Make tumors, or just directly fucl with neurons or blood vesself, make a little prop stopping the blood flow and instantly cause a ton of shit, there are tons of thinhs you could so with it that should be insanely dangerous to living beings. But i remember someone saying early one life is not for combat? When he told someone he had fire and life, im not sure. And all his specializations are also only focused on healing like and nobody talks about it using it like this? Like shouldnt it be obvious? Whats up with that

Thundermike00

I do believe what you say hold merit. However, these people do not know of tumors and all that stuff. Remember this may be a society advance magical world, but because they invest so much in magic that they don't invest in technology as much. So they wouldn't know about tumors and other things that life destruction can bring

Blackjack

Its also possibly that all that you stated is within the death aspect instead of life.

Sammot

Well that could be true, the only thing that kind makes me feel it should be possible with life and that the people should know about damaging with life is that mc masters specifically doesmt let him do stuff to patients because its dangerous, so if that is possible it should be possible to deliberately do stuff wrong no?

Darune Albane

Yep .. life should be the most powerful of them all

Blackjack

You have a point. However, I got the impression is that he could heal someone without truly understanding the injury and that it heal will unravel before fixing the issue. Like treating a symptom, not the true problem.

Blackjack

Damn..is it possible to get the next chapter and skip out on Fridays? This was a giant cliff 😭

Halfcrzy

Probably the first chapter I haven't liked. He felt pathetic begging so much, incredibly weak and useless for going into his 5th year. And has the audacity to say stuffs impossible when clearly he has never dueled before. Actually a skippable chapter.

Emissary of Nothingness

By that logic, Water would be the strongest Aspect, because you could just “suck” the water out of someone’s body and bam, everyone’s dead. ;) Life could potentially be used offensively in combination with another Aspect, but even then it would still be more of an area effect and something that could be defended against fairly easily with a normal Magical Shield. Plus, to me, that would feel like a waste of a Specialization. You can defeat people just as well with other Aspects, but those won’t necessarily save your own ass or your friends when things go wrong.

Blackjack

Really? I disgree completely. This feels like the 1st chapter in awhile where Arien was actually in danger. Obviously, he wasnt going to die, but the tension was present. Lets not also forget, Arien is 11. I feel like this is exactly what would happen if an 11 year old fought for their life against a 20-something noble mage scion. Despite Arien's advantages, nobles just have a solid headstart. 🤷🏾‍♂️

Baconwargod

Welp I think he’s gonna have to sign on with Reyna sooner rather than later. If only to appease tensions maybe would be counter productive but if he could be a part of her personal retinue that may allow him some shielding from the consequences. Though more than likely this was all a way for her brother to extract concessions or resources from Reyna for the fun of it.

Silver Beard

Making the MC weak and pathetic is not a good look for the story while he's trying to stand independent.

Emissary of Nothingness

Arien is 13, while Ramsy is close to 30 and has been carrying out special missions for his House for years. But other than that, thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it, and this still isn’t the end. ;)

Baconwargod

Literally what else is he supposed to do and it’s been covered that he’s dueled quite a bit. He was effectively ambushed by likely a Mage that’s lvl 50+ with every resource you could ever ask for since his birth and is ten years his senior likely having graduated from the academy 5 years ago.

Baconwargod

Arien is in way over his head and hasn’t had context for how big of a disadvantage he’s working with compared to his noble friends. This shows that better than anything this is the kind of thing he’s gotta accept if he tries to forge his own path especially as weak relatively to others as he is.

Blackjack

Is it? Does it? I feel like youre having a complete opposite read than I do. If anything, this experience has shown that Arien would want to sign with anyone other than Reyna's family. Or this is proof that he wont want to deal with nobles and their factions until he's much stronger. As for appearances, this is actually a bad look for Reyna's House. I imagine its frowned upon to attack and kill guests staying in your home. Its likely why he was so adamant to gain Arien's word on what actually happened.

K

Love seeing the gulf between Arien and an heir/graduate of Songleaf. Looking forward to their interaction again after a few time skips.

Baconwargod

It seems counter productive but to me currently the person able to give him the most protection at the moment is Reyna. If he joins another faction he will be fairly low on their totem pole which means if the brother holds a grudge he’s expendable. No one is wasting time protecting a promising 11 year old from the wrath of a very powerful scion of the one of the strongest noble families on the continent. Renya mean while can protect him via proximity by at least shielding him as a part of the retinue.

Blackjack

🤔 I could see your logic, however, I feel like it can be flipped on its head as well. If he signs with Reyna and her brother holds a grudge, then Arien could be given an assignment thats suicide or even stage an attempt to make Arien's death look like an accident.

Emissary of Nothingness

I’m tempted, but tomorrow’s cliffhanger will be even bigger. The visit won’t actually end until Friday’s chapter.

simsim

tyftc - i like the helplesness - i even think its almost a wonder that nothing more happened - but that is probably bcs of the scions control over mana

Robert Hinshaw

Didn't love this chapter, but it did build tension, so maybe that's intended. It felt a bit off given the time jump was supposed to be Arien studying magic, and now it just feels like all that was for nothing (but I forget he's only thirteen, so maybe the ramp up is just longer--except he and Will spend so much time talking about a rescue it feels urgent, like they should already be powering up). I think the interaction was supposed to show that Arien has a long way to go, maybe shock him into trying harder or something, but that doesn't really fit with the story up until now, which is Arien heavily motivated to save his mom and just grinding like crazy...and yet, all for nothing because not only is he slapped down, he doesn't even understand the basics of the field he's supposedly spent four years training in. Anyhow, still enjoying the story and trust the author has a plan, just wanted to highlight what seemed like a sudden change in tone.

Nobody is perfect

The water in the body should be protected by the soul or internal mana, or something similar. Otherwise, what would stop someone from conjuring a fireball inside an enemy’s body, using lightning to paralyze or destroy their nervous system, or using metal/earth magic to control the minerals in their body and literally tear them apart from the inside? Life should be able to bypass this protection through touch or any other method. If not then there should be no reason why they should be able to heal from distance. So it should have offensive use too! Just flood someone with Life tumors small changes in some blood vessel or nerves should be enough to kill. It would also be a perfect assassination tool: no traces, and the victim would simply appear to have died of natural causes.

Robert Hinshaw

Ah, I hadn't realized the age discrepancy was so large, it just felt like a random encounter that sort of invalidated a lot of the effort Arien had supposedly spent getting good at...well...magic. I did like the tension and the sudden raising of the stakes, that part definitely landed, and I also liked Arien having zero pride when facing a psycho noble, it's just his not understanding any of the magic stuff (again, his sole focus for four years, no?) which frustrated me as a reader.

Nobody is perfect

I think this should be a wake-up call for him to start using the advantages he has! His affinities, for example. He has a Death affinity and still has open skill slots, so why isn't he using them?

Robert Hinshaw

Yeah, I agree that this would make anyone sensible want to do one thing: stay away from the psycho noble, not join up so you can have even more dealings with the family that clearly kills peasants like someone steps on an ant. And since Arien has some scruples, do you think he'd ever want his magic and service be commanded by the family that produced noble psycho? Presumably he can just grovel until he gets back to the school and use that and his professors as a shield until he graduates. Also, if threatening people into service was a thing, wouldn't every noble family just stage little attacks like this and force everyone who visits them to join up? It strikes me that this would quickly spiral out of control.

Rip Woodham

She already said she wouldn't be the only person able to command him from her family. If even she had to immediately acknowledge that, Arien could easily find himself at his command for one reason or another, and we've seen the kind of commands he would give. Further, what does it say about the rest of her family? Nope nah and no.

Baconwargod

That’s fair it’s definitely a double edged sword he’s definitely in a very bad situation now that he’s earned the eye of the brother not sure how he should go about navigating it, but it’s gonna be tricky no matter what

PJ

Thanks for the chapter !

Andrew

It looks like cutthroat competition is the norm not only between Great Houses, but inside them as well. An open attack on guests could easily be an attempt by one sibling to sabotage another.

Emissary of Nothingness

Ramsy is several leagues above even the final-year students, which is why Arien had never seen anything like that before.

Robert Hinshaw

Yeah, that makes sense, sorry if my above comments come off as overly negative, really enjoying the story, so it's mostly that you are successfully doing the Dickens thing of crushing your heroes before they fight their way up.

Ondrej Hanslik

Eh, I guess I am dropping this, at least the subscription. There is too much disconnect between chapters and somehow all the important parts are skipped. There are new characters (again) and they are not introduced at all. Instead, we just jump directly into some action scene. Then we get to know that Arien, even with his enormous perception stat won't notice trails? It's already a big stretch to randomly meet a spoiled noble on a supposedly enormous territory. I can accept the attack, but Arien's reaction is just stupid. Why would he use fireballs against an obviously better and experienced fire mage? Why would he even provoke him more by attacking instead of saving up his mana for defense and healing? Offense is the best defense only if you can actually defeat the other party *without repercussions*. He cannot defeat someone obviously better and even if he could, he cannot afford to hurt a noble. It feels like the author does not have a clear view of the story and just jumps from one idea to another. Time skips are fine but you have to at least write what happened during that time skip. It's bad writing to just meet a character and *then* say they already met him the day before. And the teammates were not even introduced.

Ondrej Hanslik

Yeah, the author has some view of all the characters and backgrounds but somehow forgets to actually write them down for us.

Halfcrzy

Honestly this is my thoughts too. Older brother, here I imagined like 2 or 3 years older. And Ariens one thing being magic, and he looks totally incompetent here. I still think this chapter needs editing for more descriptions, and to make Arien look less like his first day seeing magic vs being a 5th year

Rip Woodham

I'm not sure what else could be expected out of Arien here... what he's been learning from the teacher assigned to him is healing. Will kicks his ass in fights without trying. He's always been soft. He has talent in magic but he isn't being instructed in battle magic anymore than the next common student in his class who doesn't have a combat teacher assigned to them personally. His talent in magic is still handicapped for the time being by not picking up spellcasting. He can pick up affinities easily but he doesn't have the slots for them and his spread is too wide. Arien is more of a generalist with a strong healing specialization. He can't take the kind of healing cases he could if he had an actual healing build with his affinity. Put him against a graduate level son of a prominent noble house that is possibly known for specializing in fire and he is merely a toddler. But I agree that compared to what Arien could already do before he joined a premier magic school... with a 4 year timeskip... the progression does not feel rewarding.

Dylan King

I dont mind Arien getting his ass kicked but setting up rules and expectations this early in the series is quite critical, to have people breaking those already is tonal whiplash, it also diminishes the stakes quite alot, if hes another level of character simply show him performing at another level of already established magic, dont break the rules as established unless there is a payoff and frankly its too early for that. Will continue reading because theres a lot to love here.

Emissary of Nothingness

Sorry, but I literally wrote that he’s more than a decade older. "Ramsy Voltorey, Reyna’s older brother by more than a decade, sat perfectly still with his hands resting on his knees."

Rip Woodham

I agree about the characterization, skips and perception (it makes no sense to me why Arien would be relatively terrible at such a thing) but think Arien attacking with fireballs was smart. Arien could have been overwhelmed immediately if he'd merely focused on defense. The disparity was that great. So he lit the woods on fire to get help to him faster. Attacking clumsily with his own element also possibly enticed the noble to play with him longer compared to just standing there behind a simple shield.

Blackjack

Opf.. Reading comprehension guys 🤦🏾

Ian

Arien is pretty smart, seems like he would pick up more quickly that throwing fireballs at someone with a clear fire aspect is a mistake. I understand that he is learning something here about spell control and capturing another person’s spells, but the way it’s presented with him continuing to spam fireballs doesn’t make sense to me. Separately, Arien, when he was smaller, was focused on physical training as well (maybe not fighting, but at least conditioning) , but that seems to no longer be a things, even though there appear to be other mages that are physically focused as well.

Emissary of Nothingness

Thanks for all the support so far, I really appreciate it! I do have a vision for the story, but I also like leaving readers some room to think and speculate. Things like: “What was Ramsy actually doing in that clearing?”, “Is he really just some spoiled brat?”, or “Why did Arien want to set the forest on fire, and what was his plan after that?” Like I’ve said many times before, characters can lie, manipulate, or simply choose not to reveal their intentions. They don’t explain their plans just to make sure their opponent is properly informed about what they’re doing.

Kreylix

them. (Insert open quotes) Forgive

Parably

This chapter is super needed. Arien has been treating everything too lackadaisically. He needed a real reason to get stronger faster.

Jonas Abraham

Yeah please do not take the criticism seriously of the guys that fail to READ the story! Reading comprehension is really on an all time low.

EvilKing

To be honest, the last thing i woulda wanna do is join someone's family for 20 years after some douche just attacked me. Actually, the first thing this would make me wanna do is join that prince's faction.

Jonas Abraham

I really really loved this chapter, it raised the stakes and tension! And i do not undertand some of the criticism. Arien reacted exactly like you would expect from him if you paid attention. He is not an idealistic idiot that would just oppse the noble to defend his principles, not if it would mean certain death. And what do you guys expect that he just oneshots an absolute Elite of the country with 13?!?!? SMH

Jonas Abraham

Exactly my take too and your last point would also be somewhat of my criticism. But i was not a fan of the timeskip anyways. I would have love to see the firsts 6-12 months of the academy. That way we could have seen more of the bonding of the friend group, more exposition about the magic system and maybe politics and established some parameter of what level of competence could be expected of an average student. For example the merchant son, who was ariens roommate ( I already forgot his name), his departure had no emotional impact whatsoever. I really hope that the rest of the academ years will not be too rushed.

shacochan

I have to agree with halfcrazy, there are several oddities. I get that Arien is a city kid but he has high perception. Wilderness survival should be trivial to him. He is also not a kid and the years in this universe has more days than ours. His thoughts throughout this entire chapter was childish. Arien sees the noble use a fire spell with ludicrous proficiency yet decides to cast fire spells against him anyway. Arien is a fire mage. He has seen class upgrades that involve controlling flame. It does not take a genius to infere a mage a decade his senior has a class to control any source of fire mana. I did not like this chapter one bit and if Arien continues to display traits I'd expect from a barbarian, I'll drop this series.

WickedlyDesigned

Not sure what to think of this chapter, or rather the visit as a whole. First, the level of wealth that these Houses seem to have is prettyhard to justify, not because wealth disparity on its own is unrealistic, but because the country they reside in has been described as one on the lower end of the power/prosperity scale, and what we have seen in this story about the rural areas, there does not seem to be a sufficient base to concentratethis much wealth without actively destabilizing the country. And the ability to project force as a house, or any faction, really, seems to lag compared to the wealth shown here just as much, as evidenced by the fact that the raids at the start of the story could succeed. Second: magical advancement in general, specifically the progression of casting complexity vs spell power by level, seems to be off. Fireball is described as a 3rd level spell, that represents 4 years of progress in an internationally acclaimed learning institution. As Arien's current progress is mostly in line with the top of his year, along with his well above average stats, I would expect him to have about as much ability as the average army battlemage from a non-top school (given all the previous mentions on average levels and such), not a veteran, but one already out of training. If I'm right and this is their level of ability then they are a waste of training time. To me, this disparity in expectations seems to be a worldbuilding mistake: an initial idea of power levels was set at the starting process and then got adjusted downward to not make academy students overpowered. And this change wasn't then carried over to the rest of the world. Third: at the beginning of the academy arc, we had basically a chapter or two dedicated to the idea that getting a 3rd attunement is such an achievement, and prince whatshisname getting one is rumorworthy news, and Reina explicitly stated that choosing to join Arien and his friends happened because she thought he might be capable of matching Efie in getting his 3rd. Yet, based on the character profiles recently shared, 3rd attunements became the norm in their group/year. Fourth: classes. Arien was offered multiple rare classes among his first choices. How come he is still a mage? Him not getting the opportunity to upgrade it during the skip feels like a choice to intentionally nerf him. I mean, he has multiple second advancement skills, how is him not qualifying for something better that actually matches what he is doing realistic and proportional? Fifth: Arien's stats don't seem to affect anything but spellcasting ability in a nebulously positive manner and his mana pool. No other signs that his actual mental abilities are stages beyond his peers. And that's sloppy. Sixth: the fight here. Why, exactly, did he attack? Retaliation just openedhim up legally, as self defense claims on a noble's own land aren't usually strong against said noble. Defend and send a fireball or four up high: get the canopy burning, easier to spot than slowly spreading ground level fires, leaves more mana for shielding. Attacking instead was simply stupid. As of now, I'm staying to see how the visit as such plays out, but if it turns into a plot device to force Arien into a contract or something equally disgusting, I'm dropping the story. It would be a shame to have to do that, but this would not be the first nor the last story that wasn't able to fulfill the promise of its premise.

shacochan

I thought this novel was shaping up to be like Mushoku Tensei but apparently a deadbeat goon addict has more intellectual acumen than Arien. People have enjoyed Art of the adept and Mage Errant but those books were not for me.

Phillip Ingram

The Jester setup with the father was strange and this felt odd too. I'm assuming he was waiting for them and this was supposed to be some type of test? Reina clearly wanted others to visit, so an extremely hostile family would be odd. Both interactions for Arien have been negative, not what you would expect from a house trying to recruit a talented life affinity mage. Is this supposed to be them giving up on him entirely with the rejection? We really don't know enough about Reina or her circumstances for any type of frame of reference. The faction discussion a couple of chapters ago mostly focused on who's for or against who, maybe the context for this is there? Usually there's some type of buildup but it feels like the pacing is all wrong. This doesn't feel startling or surprising or unexpected, just disjointed.

Emissary of Nothingness

Love the analysis, I really do. I won’t respond to everything, though, because that would spoil chapters from both this week and next week. 1. There are six Old Houses, all of them several hundred years old, so that kind of accumulated wealth isn’t anything particularly unusual. Also, the far east of Wyndor, where Arien is from, is basically a poor backwater, but the rest of the kingdom isn’t. I tried to show that in Arc 2 through places like Jakar, Torben, and Wayhold. Even Wayhold’s outskirts, along with the villages around it, stretched for hours of travel along the river. The city and surrounding area have close to a million people, give or take. 2. The first years at the Academy are mostly about building foundations in Mana Manipulation and learning a huge amount of theory. That’s one of the reasons I decided to use a time skip. Maybe I should have added a few more chapters at the end of Arc 2 to show that period better, though. From the fifth year onward, the real grind begins, along with Mana Manipulation at a level that actually requires both strong stats and much better control over magic. 3. As for Aspects, like I said: “Three is harder, but still realistic for someone talented enough to graduate from the Academy.” In Arien’s current group, Pori and Reyna both have three, and they’re both in the top 10 of their year. Prince Cedrick discovered his third at the beginning of his fourth year, while also being part of the House of Sword.

Dkoptes

Tftc. Really loved this one. First time seeing him fight seriously since the skip and it's nice to see what he can do and how strong others are too

Kev

Well i will say that you start falling into the trap of kind of forgetting the fact that our little mage is in fact like what 40-50 years old, he migh be new with magic subjects but his way of thinking should be way more mature then that, in that last 10+ chapter , we have a guys of 10-13 years old that it and to be honest it is not bad. I would suggest to just delete the part that he is from earth and add that he is a choosen of a unknown entity wtv. Or you can truly read back and ask yourself would a 40 years old act like that ... just me honest contribution so far story good

Nev

It wasn't very smart of Arien to attack him back, considering all the stories he had heard about powerful factions using any excuse they can find to force people into their service. Attacking high nobility seems like perfect excuse to force a thirty year contract on someone

Will

Probably my least favourite chapter so far. High perception and can't notice a trail in the forest. A house attacking guests? Typically one of the greatest offenses is societies such as these. Then him "attacking" back with fireballs against a much greater fire mage? I can't even... lots of things that are just very strange and is kind of jarring. Brings me out of the immersion.

Adinolfi

I actually enjoyed the chapter. It makes sense to me, and it’s a good reality check. We know Arien is getting better with magic but is nowhere near useful yet, so the panic feels real, even not making the best decision in using fire. Everything he has done until now was in a safe environment, so expecting him to be good would make no sense. This is much more believable. The only way is up from here. He can keep focusing on getting better, and maybe add a bit more effort in combat training to his routine (something he has already started doing recently). His goal is to save his family, and maybe this will help him realizing he’s nowhere near ready for that, and it should help him wait for the right moment instead of rushing into it.

A. Brown

Lol think you got your stories mixed. Songleaf is from Gifted. Here it's the Academy

A. Brown

If Arien testified in Ramsy's favor no rules would be broken because Ramsy would have been "defending himself." He's just sure that he can make everyone go along because the cost to go against is so strong

Dylan King

Im talking about the rules of the magic system not the legal rules. Sorry I should have been more clear.

A. Brown

Fantastic chapter! Sorry folks are desperate for it all to go his way, this is probably my favorite chapter of this arc. The last couple chapters have been a very effective way to set the lay of the land.