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The next few hours passed in a blur. Once the adrenaline began to fade, Arien felt completely drained. His legs felt like lead, and he kept falling several steps behind the others on the way back to the manor.

Greg and Harik supported Matt under the shoulders. He had regained consciousness after a few minutes without any major injuries, though he was clearly weakened. As for Ellie and Missy, neither seemed particularly interested in helping Arien, so he simply gritted his teeth and trudged along at the back of the group.

A hot shower and the dinner delivered to his rooms finally helped him recover some of his strength.

Having been lodged in the guest wing of the manor three days earlier, he had finally realized why the estate had to be so enormous. Despite being merely one of Reyna's classmates, he had been given an apartment consisting of a spacious bedroom, a small entrance hall, a sitting room furnished with sofas, armchairs, and a surprisingly well-stocked bookshelf, as well as a bathroom with magnificent heated marble floors. He wondered what the chambers reserved for truly prestigious guests looked like.

Now that he could think calmly, the entire affair seemed even stranger.

His earlier conclusion that Ramsy was simply insane no longer made much sense. Reyna probably would have warned them if her brother were genuinely unstable, and more importantly, Arien had never actually been in mortal danger.

That did not make him forgive Ramsy, but the pattern was difficult to ignore. If the man had wanted him dead, Arien would have been ashes before he managed to raise his first Shield. Instead, every attack had given him enough time to react without carrying enough force to overwhelm his defenses.

Ramsy had been testing him. 

Arien still had no idea why, or whether Matt had been part of the same test. He remembered Matt’s reaction after they explained what had happened while he was unconscious. The initial anger had quickly given way to humiliation once he realized how easily Ramsy had dealt with him. Arien knew him well enough to understand how badly that would sting.

Looking back, the fight seemed far more controlled than it had felt at the time. Ramsy had barely moved, used only one spell at a time, and repeatedly given Arien enough time to respond. At moments, it almost seemed as though he had wanted Arien to fight back.

Was it connected to Arien rejecting Reyna’s offer? Did she know?

Probably not. Her fury in the clearing had looked real, and Arien doubted even Reyna was that good an actress.

Perhaps it was some conflict within the Voltorey family, an attempt to frighten away her friends or potential allies. That still did not explain the testing.

A soft knock at the door interrupted his thoughts.

Wrapped in a bathrobe, Arien was lying on a sofa buried beneath soft cushions. If he had not been determined to make sense of the day, he probably would have fallen asleep already.

“Come in,” he called without moving. He was technically injured after a difficult battle. Resting seemed entirely justified.

“Hey, Arien.”

Reyna stood uncertainly in the doorway, pale and exhausted, with dark circles beneath reddened eyes. More unsettling than any of that was the hesitation in her expression. Reyna was rarely hesitant about anything.

“Hey, Rey, come in. Why are you just standing there?” he asked, sitting up.

“I don’t know if you even want to see me.”

“As long as I don’t see a Fiery Whip wrapped around you, I don’t see a problem.”

A faint smile appeared on her face. “I’m glad you haven’t lost your sense of humor.” She walked over and sat beside him. “I came to apologize. I’m—”

“Did you tell your brother to attack me?”

“Of course not!” She jumped to her feet.

“Then you have nothing to apologize for.” Arien motioned for her to sit again.

After a moment, she did.

“Rey, I’ve had some time to think about everything. Earlier, it felt like I was fighting for my life, but now...” He studied her. “Your brother was testing me, wasn’t he?”

“Yes. I don’t know why. Truly. Naturally, he won’t admit it. He claims he was peacefully meditating when you barged in without showing proper respect. Then you supposedly reached for magic, and he merely gave you a gentle reprimand because you were guests of our House.”

“That... what the...” Arien stared at her. “That isn’t what happened at all.”

“I know. I’ve already spoken with Matt and Ellie.”

“How’s Matt?”

Reyna took a moment before answering. “Furious. He understands what happened, but I don’t know if I’ll ever be able to repair my friendship with him after what my brother did.”

She fell silent, then looked at Arien with the same uncertainty she had shown when she entered the room.

“If you mean us, nothing has changed,” Arien said. “Well, maybe one thing. Next time you invite me somewhere, make sure your brother isn’t nearby. He’s exhausting.”

Reyna snorted with laughter, and some color finally returned to her face. “Thank you, Arien. For everything.”

She stayed for nearly another hour. They talked about the fight until neither of them had much more to say, then moved on to lighter subjects. By the time Arien’s eyes began closing on their own, Reyna laughed, escorted him to the bedroom, and ordered him to sleep.

He drifted off the moment his head touched the mattress.

Reyna lay awake late into the night, going over the day again and again.

She had spent years at the Academy accounting for people who might interfere with her plans, yet on her own family’s estate she had failed to consider the most obvious threat of all: her family. Ramsy had probably cost her Matt’s trust, and he could easily have cost her Arien as well.

What stupidity. What naivety. And she had thought herself so intelligent.

She should have realized something was wrong the moment her father appeared at the estate without warning, followed shortly afterward by Ramsy.

Damn it, Ramsy!

She still could not decide why he had done it. Perhaps he wanted to prove that he could reach her even here, or remind her that she should never assume she was safe simply because she was on familiar ground.

His expression afterward bothered her most. While she shouted at him, he had simply stood there smiling, perfectly aware of how angry he was making her.

She had wanted to strangle him.

Unfortunately, Ramsy was nearly thirty, an accomplished mage, and a veteran of missions Reyna knew almost nothing about. He disappeared for months at a time on Portal raids, conflicts with rival Factions, and assignments abroad, usually returning even stronger than before.

Arien had been right that Ramsy had controlled the fight from beginning to end. He had also been wrong to think that meant he was safe. Ramsy could have killed him and suffered little more than political inconvenience. House Voltorey would have called it a training accident, paid the appropriate fines and compensation, and moved on.

Even killing Matt would not have been enough to seriously endanger their House. He was the son of a general, but the Stonewalls lacked the political backing to challenge a family like the Voltoreys.

Thankfully, killing them had never seemed to be the point.

The question was what Ramsy had actually wanted, and whether the idea had been his at all. Her older brother rarely did anything significant without her father’s approval or direct orders.

That was what kept Reyna awake.

They were gathered in the family hall of the manor, a room whose size and decoration reflected the wealth of House Voltorey despite how rarely it was used. Her father preferred his personal study, protected against eavesdropping, divination, and nearly every other form of espionage imaginable.

He sat on a velvet-cushioned chair atop a shallow dais. Behind him hung enormous green-and-burgundy banners bearing the fox of House Voltorey surrounded by hunting eagles. Their family history stretched back to the Empire of Three Suns, granting them the status of an Old House, something no amount of wealth or influence could ever buy for newer nobility.

It also ensured they would never lack enemies.

Ramsy stood beside their father, dressed as always in black. At least the mocking smile was gone.

“Father,” Reyna began cautiously. “I wanted to—”

“Rey, Rey, Rey...” Serig said. “Whatever am I going to do with you? I let you play your little games, hoping you’d learn something, yet you remain the same naive little girl.”

“Father—”

“Silence.”

The word wiped away half the arguments she had prepared.

“Today I will teach you a lesson that Sammy unfortunately failed to understand.”

At the sound of her older brother’s name, Reyna’s stomach tightened. She glanced toward Ramsy and saw his fists clench.

Five years later, Sammy’s betrayal still shaped almost everything their family did.

“I allowed you to recruit several people from the Academy whom you considered useful. Yet even in that, you failed. However, the fact that you continued your acquaintance with those boys forced us to take more radical measures. Ramsy?”

“The first boy, Matthew Stonewall, son of Reiherd Stonewall,” her brother began. “Two Aspects, currently fifteenth in the year. As far as magical talent is concerned, average. When I attacked him, he managed to block my spell, but the impact from the shattered Shield threw him into a tree and rendered him unconscious, preventing further testing. Nevertheless, judging by the Academy reports, he shows promise as a combat mage, especially if he joins the army. As for connections: minor nobility, and an influential father known as a brilliant strategist. Worth recruiting. However, Reyna never made him an offer.”

“I was waiting for the right moment,” she interjected, barely containing her anger. Now, Matt would probably never agree to enter the service of their House.

“We do not wait for the right moments. We create them,” her brother said coldly. “The second boy. Arien Terryson, son of Terry Lowson. Three Aspects, including Life. Currently fifth in the year. In terms of magical talent, high. After witnessing the attack on Matt, he was better prepared. He managed to stop successive attacks as I gradually increased their strength. Furthermore, despite the sudden violence of the situation, he did not break down and devised a plan, which he then proceeded to implement.”

“A plan?” she asked in surprise. When Arien had spoken about the fight, he claimed he had barely managed to defend himself.

“Yes. Of course, it was rather naive, but against an enemy several levels lower, it might have worked. He tried to set the forest around himself on fire while making it appear accidental, so that he could later withdraw under its cover, probably together with Matt. I suspect that if your bodyguard had not intervened, he would have cast a fairly large Earth Wall and attempted to escape at that moment. As I said, a naive plan, but executed under unfavorable circumstances and using simple spells.”

Ramsy paused before continuing, which was unusual enough to make Reyna pay closer attention.

“There is one more thing, Father. I did not include it in yesterday’s report, as I was not certain.”

“Yes?” Serig asked, giving his son a curious look.

“I think he is hiding his level. I am not accustomed to fighting opponents that weak, but I ran the calculations this morning, and it seems to me that he had between one and a half to two times more mana than would be normal for someone his age. The number of spells he cast and the cost of maintaining Mana Shield... Yes. Either he has put all his points into Intellect, or his level is much higher”

Reyna stared at her brother in disbelief. Was this another trick? Or had he truly discovered something she had failed to notice for all these years?

“That is interesting. If it is true, then all the more reason we must destroy him,” her father said in the same tone one might use to comment on the weather.

“Yes. It’s obvious,” Ramsy agreed. “He shows promise as a mage. He has no significant connections, but in this case, that is even better, it means we would have to provide him with fewer resources. However, Reyna failed in this regard as well, and he rejected the contract offer. If we cannot have him, it would be safer to arrange for his expulsion from the Academy... or his death.”

“No!” Reyna shouted. “Arien is my project, and I will not let you take him away from me!”

He was also her friend, though she would never admit that here. She had barely admitted it to herself. Trusting people had already cost their family enough.

“Of course, my dear daughter,” her father said sweetly. “But we shall see whether you say the same thing after I meet him myself.”

Reyna finally understood what he intended.

“I have heard that Arien enjoys comfort, and judging by the amount of food he has consumed while staying with us, I suspect he would not turn down a small gift to help him begin his life in the capital.”

Serig’s eyes gleamed with amusement.

“What do you think? Will he choose you... or the fortune and advancement that money can buy?”

Hey! Thanks so much for all your support here. Because of you, I’ve been able to take on less work lately, which means I’m now spending around 10 hours a day writing new chapters and editing the end of Arc 3.

Comments

Sammot

I cant wait for the time that arien stomps on these arrogant losers

K

Great chapter and more insight into the houses. Followed and rated, but I’ll drop a favorite as well.

Knyko

Will be really interesting tomorrow it seems

DeVeritate

Typo boy instead of boys "Yet even in that, you failed. However, the fact that you continued your acquaintance with that boys forced us to take more radical measures. Ramsy?”

Stygon

Tftc!

Baconwargod

Makes more sense and yeah Arien is gonna be forced into joining a faction at this point. As soon as he was noticed it was over he’s on the board and he does not have the connections or resources to protect him now.

Jonas Abraham

I have to be honest, I am a little miffed that Arien is not angry or at leats somewhat frustrated with the situation. Either he doesn't take this whole affair seriously, that would be a big problem. It would mean that he is still very naive even with his 20+ more life experience or he is arrogant beyond belief and thinks that they could not touch him. The second explanation does not make sense with Arien and the first one is a little frustrating after all this time.

Andi Scherndl

Could you please spoil us and release another chapter? I can’t wait 😢😉

Rip Woodham

Seems like they are being at least a smidgeon overdramatic and cruel here for Reyna's "sake."

Phillip Ingram

This is something I've often been frustrated by in series like this. Supposedly neighboring countries also send their people to this academy, but these 6 factions have a complete lockdown on who is allowed to progress past a certain point. And it's basically a slavery contract for 15+ years? I feel like there would be options in reality, with their own upsides and downsides. Independent mages who have gone through and hated this system and want to provide alternatives, Master's who take on apprentices and invest in promising talent. Other schools and paths of progression. If this academy is so ancient, and mages especially live so long, how is there such a chokehold/monopoly? Arien may very well get forced into a terrible deal, but I hope he doesn't. There are other countries and options, the only race right now is to get his family members back. If he's going to live a long life, why allow himself to be chained.

Baconwargod

I don’t necessarily think it’ll be a bad deal I just do think he’s gonna be forced into making one. With who I’d say that’s up in the air depending on how this talk goes, but he’s now a piece on the board and you either play or become someone else’s pawn. He’s gonna have to play now no matter what

Baconwargod

Yeah Arien shouldn’t be quite this naive. It’s crazy he isn’t more worried about this. He should understand the implications this brings at least in part. No more hiding and he doesn’t have enough protection to have been taken notice of

Blackjack

I agree. Not necessarily with the reasoning but he should be angry. I think his response is not truly realistic as a 13 year old. Id be mad at Matt for being so reckless. Id be mad at Reyna for putting me in this situation. And id be mad at myself for my helplessness. People don't respond rationally, especially in the aftermath of life or death experience.

Emissary of Nothingness

There are students from other countries, but those countries have their own systems of education and magic that train most of their mages. It’s not like the Academy is the only option on the continent. Foreign students also don’t need to seek the backing of Wyndor’s factions, since they have their own, and they’re sent to the Academy for all kinds of different reasons.

Blackjack

Im going to die on this hill but I dont think he's going to sign any contract to join a faction. Despite the danger, I think he's going to refuse. Mainly? Because it just wouldnt make sense narratively. I dont think we have in store for us the MC losing agency for the next 15-25 years of his life. Especially considering his goal of saving his mom and sister. Lets also recall the sailors token. He can sacrifice the token for a captain to provide him safety and travel. I also dont consider Arien valuing his continued enrollment in the academy over his independence. I think hes going to refuse the offer, get kicked out of the academy and use the sailors token to flee the capital to avoid assassination. The only other option I see is the heavyhandedness of this House will force Arien to join the Prince's faction.

Baconwargod

It could but it would also be a convent way for him to train and gain resources until hes strong enough to go to the Tyranny with Will. I’d say it depends I just think he’s gonna be pressured immensely by every faction he comes into contact with. The father’s mentality isn’t unique amongst the powerful. They will see a promising very capable mage and say if we can’t have him and he isn’t protected we will just kill him.

Floris v

Would be worth it.

Blackjack

I agree. I can take the separation! Lol

Phillip Ingram

Burn it down and salt the ashes! But I think Blackjack is on the right track. It will be interesting to see what happens.

Baconwargod

If so then there was basically no academy arc and Id thought wed been building up years 5-10 tbh. Being forced to leave just as the instruction gets useful and progression really starts would be hard to come back from.

Blackjack

🤷🏾‍♂️ but that's the exact type of circumstances that make stories interesting. Conflict. I would rather Arien put himself in danger by refusing, then taking the safe route and then him having to deal with this lopsided system of noble contracts. I also think that the momentum needs to pick up and this is a great way for that to happen. Arien will advance more quickly if he has to be on the run and itll force him to level and fight which I imagine that's what everyone wants? You also point of the Tyranny quest line. There's no way that he can put off that trip until after his contract is over. He needs to go within the next few years and he needs to be strong enough to survive that. Rapid growth is required and hes not getting that in the academy.

Zeke

I don't understand the logic here. They know Arien just rejected the contract, which is explicitly rejecting the money and advancement their money can buy already. It's not like they can claim there wouldn't be any strings attached to whatever they're thinking of offering him. I guess they just can't fathom someone not being suicidal greedy and shortsighted?

Floris v

My best guess is we'd see him till the end of the year at uni, make a lot of progress and then have to flee, hopefully with a nice ambush attempt. That way we get at least one dungeon, him exposing Thunder and possible a fifth aspect by then. Reyna will come back way, way later as a relevant character. Or perhaps even flee with him.

Baconwargod

Fair point Im seeing what youre putting down. I wonder if he wouldnt make contact with the former teacher from Wills estate. Will would also have to obviously come along while he runs. HMMMMM

Blackjack

I agree. But I imagine that the offer will be more clear rather than Reyna's more nebulous offer? Like they'll clearly identify exactly what agreeing would mean, perhaps?.

Sol

Think this is where I stop reading for now. Each chapter is such a vanishingly small snippet and we get so little movement in the plot while being inundated with characters who have no real definition to them. May pick it back up later, but I'd seriously consider slowing your release schedule in favor of longer, more detailed chapters with better pacing because the quality has taken a significant hit since the arrival at Wayhold. None of these new characters are sufficiently fleshed out. The world building has become extremely shallow and unsatisfying, and the magic exploration and curiosity that defined Arien early in the story has fallen by the wayside in favor of extremely opaque and dry political intrigue involving the maneuvering of characters you've given us precious little reason to care about. In brief, it's becoming a bog standard academy litrpg, and that's a shame. Appreciate the work you put into the first arc and hope there's a return to form later.

A.C.E.

I hope those 10 hours a day you're talking about are sustainable; it's never good to push yourself too hard in the long run.

Robert Hinshaw

Yeah, I agree, and I'm also a bit confused at Reyna's father and brother taking a recruit or death approach. That can't make sense given what we know of the setting, can it? Wouldn't the school notice if the top students turned up dead or enslaved to noble families? If this is such a threat, why on earth wouldn't other noble families assassinate incoming mages as they approach another family's estate, given that forcible recruitment or death is allowed? I totally get that nobles can be ruthless and not beholden to laws, but the behavior suggested by the patriarch seems a bit too savage to be born out by the setting if you game it out even a little.

Jonas Abraham

Hmm I think your reasoning is better, i second it.

PJ

Thanks for the chapter ! Ten hours a day oO dude I need to write the story of our past dnd campaign and I cant find the motivation for more than an hour or two per day XD

Halfcrzy

Hey want to apologize for yesterday's comments. Today's chapter really helped explain things and even it out. Still have some issues with the amount of begging, but that is neglible at this point.

Snooze Bear

Really love how you angled the reason behind the fight. Makes them intelligent rather than just arrogant enemies. Looking forward to this offer and how he maneuvers to decline it.

Rip Woodham

Eh? Aren't they going to offer him something precious on some condition like "stay out of my daughter's life?" It's nothing like being asked to be an indentured slave to their family for 20 years. Test his loyalty with carrot and stick. Greed, fear.

Thundermike00

I think he is angry. I think he’s just hiding it. Because realistically, what would you do in a mansion of somebody else’s that may be spying on you as we speak and anything you say or do might threaten them in a way that they might want to eliminate you faster than before. So he’s probably pretending to not be angry about it because realistically even if he’s angry about it, he can’t do anything about it. Let’s get that straight. They can eliminate him and he can’t do a goddamn thing about it nor anyone else can do a thing about it.

Dkoptes

Yeah, probably more laid out in a way, and with less strings attached, except ofcourse not choosing her in whatever form that may come

Dkoptes

Tftc. Enjoying learning more about her family and what higher level mages can do

Merlin King

That is so very dramatic, almost cartoonishly so

Rip Woodham

I don't think he should be angry because... I think he's been expecting to face these kinds of unfair situations all along. He knows that thinking about what is "fair" is only going to have a negative impact. Besides unfairness what should he be angry about? Reyna didn't betray him. He could be killed or maimed without consequence and for no reason, but he hasn't been. He wasn't hurt or forced to hurt anyone else. He "could of been" is something people have to deal with all the time in a world like this. He knows he's going to be a target and he may not be able to avoid signing a contract that makes him essentially a slave. He's going to try to avoid it but I don't know how much hope he thinks he has of doing so. Maybe he should be more afraid. But by this point Arien has gone through a tremendous amount and he isn't just a child. Maybe his teenage body chemistry should be affecting him more, idk, but he's led a hard life.

Emissary of Nothingness

I’m genuinely impressed. It takes guts to apologize on the internet. I hope tomorrow’s chapter also gets rid of some of the frustration over the begging. :>

Rip Woodham

Independent mages providing an alternative? Maybe they do, but I don't see why they would here, for nobodies. This is the system of the nobles, and, the powerful in general. They gain powerful servants and tie them to themselves... why wouldn't they? Why would they let someone buck the system that's beneficial to all of them? Why would someone want to be severely contracted to them when someone is offering comparatively free training and resources? They wouldn't. If someone tried to offer that publicly, they'd find their own resources and connections cut off, if not themselves put in danger. And that's setting aside the logistics of that because... somebody's time and resources for magical training aren't cheap. In this setting I don't think indentured servitude seems at all unreasonable to high society. They aren't a society that values personal freedom, self governance, etc lol.

Robert Hinshaw

I think I’d be angry at a friend if I was invited to their house and then their brother pulled a gun and shot at me and missed. Basically: “Your brother is a complete psycho and you’re having children over on sleepovers, are you nuts!?” The author tried to soften it at the end by having Arien figure out he was just being “tested” but as a reincarnator, he should be wise enough to understand that as a child, he didn’t sign up for that shit, and that doesn’t make it ok. Now, I don’t think Arien should say that, but he should probably politely thank his hosts and never put himself under their power again (and possibly look for alternative nobles to cultivate as patrons in case they try to force him into their ranks).

Xander

Thank you for the chapter!

Emissary of Nothingness

Ten hours of doing something I enjoy isn’t too bad, but once I’m done editing the last few chapters, I’ll be able to slow down a little.

Ivan

Thanks for the chapter!

C Smith

Came to say pretty much the same thing except I would say the quality has started to go down since the end of the first arc. The first arc was pretty good. The journey to school was long with 6 chapters of pointless stories and way to much time spent on it. And everything you said about the school arc is spot on. I would add that the mc seems to have become a lazey fop.

Damian Black

Agreed with the points above. First arc was good but since arriving in the city and school it's been dry. Would like more exploration of magic, advancement, fun moments, and maybe a little more humor.