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I've written some bad haiku. Please enjoy ;)



Ask me for a trance

Kindly, nicely, thoughtfully

I just might do it


Deep Sleep? I ask you

Your mind wants it to happen,

so you sink right down


Make the trance you ask

of me, better than you thought

share what's deep inside


beg for pleasure. Drop

forget you asked.Snap! Wake up.

Do it all again


you want to go deep

open your mind for me now

it's stunning inside


close your eyes relax

spirals burned into your mind

wide for suggestion


drop drop to my words

sink sink to the brink. comply

Deeply unconscious.

Comments

christopher wilco

Better than any Haiku I heard in "our man in Japan"

Charles Valentine

I get stopped at Deep Sleep in the second stanza.