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...Aaand she wakes up.

The background is gonna be a city viewed from pretty high up, as Nailah likes to keep her daughter pretty close to her when she's not working at the shipyard. Being a Prefect, you can understand she'd have some pretty swanky dibs at the top of a corporate tower. 

That said, Tsenaya's clearly losing sleep over what she saw, but will it affect her work? That's what we get to see next! 

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Jaka Torkar

May I suggest replacing the 1st panel with her being shown in bed, because it looks weird showing a close up on her face, when there's been 2x on the last 2 panels of previous page.

Magitechnician

Or on the flipside, they should be made even more similar such that the scene and background transition around her... i suppose that doesn’t work great across a page break though

Scappo

OK, zoomed out the shot in the 1st panel so it's clearer she's in bed...is that any better?

Nïvhis

Poor girl ....

Malwave

now I really want to give her a fuckin hug ;A;