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As you can see, we've zoomed in on both characters on this page, which is why I needed to redraw the previous page so that we were zoomed out far enough to see both their bodies. 

I'm still debating what dialog to give Cebron in panel 2 (since the original dialogue I had written, on second reading felt just a little rapey, so I binned it). 

With that said, I really like the look of contentment Tsenaya's giving Cebron in panel 1...she's really enjoying this, even though she knows it's probably a bad idea. What's a girl to do? Her mom keeps killing other potential suitors!

Also that shot from underneath is basically my favorite shot in any porn ^_^;;

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Darkhom

Those POV panels look great. Gonna be an amazing page once it's done.

Synariel

very nice angle indeed

Magitechnician

Ooo i love these PoVs. And if Cebron needs dialogue... maybeee some kind of child’s lullaby in the setting? Might be an interesting writing challenge

Fyredrake

I second Aktwins comment

Selin Malianis

POV shots like the first 2 is some of the most underrated stuff ever; really glad to see it here! ♥

Nïvhis

Fortunatly Nailah don't see that ^^'