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*EDIT*: The lullaby singing on this page bothered me from the beginning, as it felt kinda weird and out of place, even for Cebron. I decided to go back and have another look at the dialog on this page, and decided it would be better to go with something else instead. 

Now, thanks to Tsenaya's internal dialog, we can see that she really wants to be fucked by someone who actually cares about her, but she's not getting that with Cebron, and he reinforces that in panel 3 where he states he's just giving her what she wants. Not because he loves her, but because somewhere deep down she knows she's not nearly as innocent as she likes to pretend she is. 

I like this a lot better since it flows a lot more seamlessly into the dialog on the next page, and isn't as strange as the singing that was there before, but I'm still grateful to  Aktwin Grakata,  Alexey Belovolsky , and now Tofutiles for their input on this page!

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Fyredrake

I love this, your choice of words is great!

Synariel

Idk if his type of rocking will help Tsenaya fall asleep. XD

Dragon86

I don't think she can sleep with something that big pounding her.

Alexey Belovolsky

And saying "ALL!" he plunged as deeply as he could... To sing a lullaby during hard BDSM sex? Only Cebron could come up with such a thing.)) Well, I am sure that he is doing this because he wants only good for Tsenaya.

Mass

I hate cebron with a passion