Comic #873: Hunter Gatherer (Patreon)

After last week's comic I still wanted more.

Initially Keydar clicking the accept button was the second to last panel, and he was going to have dialogue and jump off a cliff in the final panel. I figured the funniest part of the punchline was Keydar accepting the quest, so I found a way to just make that the punchline itself.

I was also going to have a bit more exposition in the final panel. Keydar was going to say something like, "I do this unintentionally 10 times a day, I might as well get paid." It made my intent in the punchline more clear, but it was too wordy.

This way some people might read the punchline as Keydar being super nihilistic and that's fine.

Edit: I've never done this before, but immediately after posting I realized I had gotten the punchline wrong. I wanted a version where Keydar said absolutely nothing, and just blankly clicked the accept button with no emotion.

I will leave the original here that I almost went with and you can decide for yourself which is better.