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is this video done? (Patreon)

Published:
2019-11-14 02:43:06
Imported:
2026-06

Content

what do you think mr malloy?

https://streamable.com/68xk4

Comments

Anonymous

Done! Not sure I'm ready to try that drink, but... I will feed it to my neighbor.

shaq

Thank you for your blessing, king. It'll probably go up next week. I cut out a ton of information I wasn't feeling, so I worried about clarity. This is exactly why I like the idea of Patreon to post my notes alongside finished content.

Anonymous

If you're worried about clarity you might want to maybe (just maybe) add a little bit of introduction to what the clarification is expected to do. Like instead of just saying it will remove tannins, give an example of how it might achieve a specific goal or taste. This way the viewer immediately understands the intent ("why") of the process. That statement happens, but not until about halfway through. Maybe lead with it. And keep that last comment in no matter what.

shaq

Marky boy can you DM me your address so I can mail you a magnet? Also, I should have listened to you on this one. The most common feedback on it has been "why the hell would I do this" and they're all right. I didn't make that clear. My seppuku appointment is scheduled for next week.