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I realized pretty on this story might have a little length behind it before I got done, and given the presumptive age of one of the characters, I knew I wasn't going to be able to sell it, so I figured what the hey, the EMCSA is a lot more accepting of line-fudging. Then I saw their next update wasn't go to be for two weeks. If I keep writing at this rate, I'm going to have enough to dribble it out over the next year. Yeesh. But if you wondered why I'm fussing over the earliness of the releases, it's because this post probably won't hit the free market until mid-July. I am kind of blowing my own mind with how fast I'm churning this stuff out, but once in a great while, everything just flows, and it's definitely easier to focus when you work on one story exclusively. Not usually possible (or even how I want to work), but having tons of fun with this for now.

Anyway, we're continuing our saga, picking up where we left off with young Abbie arriving at Mr. Canon's house with a present in the car for him. Shenanigans? Oh yeah, they're gonna ensue.

More to come.

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qxvw198

I am glad to see another chapter so soon, but don't collapse from lack of sleep just to keep up the pace. That would be like killing the goose that laid the golden eggs. 😊

Khellrendros

Damn, cliffhanger... I so want to know what else she had him write. I mean how far would a personal fuck toy go in order to make sure you use her.

Ferrum1

Gah! Pretty sure I'll never enjoy clifhanger endings. Overall, I found it well-written and entertaining, but far too short. The inner dialogue is fun and I like being able to see what our poor hero (?) is thinking. It takes up a ton of space, though, and I really really really want to know what kind of brainwashing went on. Thinking about it, the animosity between the sisters could really add some heat. What did Abbie say to her dear not-so-loved sister once Canon was out of it? With Abbie's attitude, there's no doubt which of the two is now firmly in charge, but details........ :D This is going to be a fun read. I can only hope that the new chapters keep dropping fast!

WDB

Great chapter! Super interesting motivations for all three main characters, and a hell of a cliffhanger. I'm particularly enjoying the Be Careful What You Wish For elements of the story, and how Abbie's going to make an MC protagonist out of Mr. Canon whether he likes it or not. The only question that was bugging me is that, since Mr. Canon established his own reality under duress, does that still make it... Canonical? ...I will see myself out.

ukyo_rulz

This is turning out to be a pretty interesting concept. Glad to hear about how your workflow on this one. Sometimes you're just in the zone, right? As a programmer I sometimes get that. Like the entire program just manifests in my head and I just need to get it into a computer. Anyway, this is great!

Seth

you're an amazing writer, thank you so much.