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The good times keep on a'rolling. First off, recommend you read first, return for my rambling commentary later. That said, I hope you're all still having fun with this meandering monster of a tail. I will confess, I have done a lot less foreplanning on this thing. It's not stream of consciousness, quite. I feel like letting myself occupy the head of Mr. Canon as he ineptly flails along, coupled with letting my writerly self chime in now and again to make things more interesting for him is working for me, though. The more he doesn't know what he's doing, the more he keeps letting things spiral more and more out of control. Except for those things (or rather, people), who are very much under control.

Now I know some folks are going to be miffed I didn't list out explicitly all of Abbie's commands, but trust me, she's got some things in the works that will be more fun as surprises. I did make sure to include a few, noted early on for the most part.

In the meantime, I don't plan on letting up the pace on this sucker any time soon - having way too much fun, and frankly, if Mr. Canon doesn't get laid soon, my balls might explode right along with his. I'm rooting for him. Kind of. More to come!

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Matt

Really enjoying this. A slower burn than I'd like but the set-up seems to be worth it, at least as long as these are coming out every few days. Although, given the release "schedule" and the timings, I have to suggest that maybe you want to consider sleeping, as it appears as if you aren't doing enough of that. "I am Mr. Canon’s protector. My top priority is keeping him safe and preserving my freedom." -> unless it's intentional that he'd be messing up the grammar here, it should be preserving *his* freedom, right?

HardhatDoozer

Despite being programmed to not be a pussy he really disappoints his loyal harem repeatedly. They just want sexual satisfaction, which he repeatedly chickens out of. Soon though the next step. What could go wrong?

HardhatDoozer

I have a solid theory of who the blackmailer is. But I don’t want to say in case I’m right. Just me being a who dun it sleuth 🕵️‍♀️ though.

HardhatDoozer

The funniest thing about this story is that it reminds me that my favourite part of “Penthouse Letters” was always “Pursuit and Capture”. Just somehow in this story it is a bit jumbled since Cannon captures everyone but we are still waiting for him to own up to pursuing them properly.

WDB

Great new chapter! The wait for the payoff is excruciating, but delightful. One of the things I really like about the way Abbie's reprogrammed Mr. Canon is... it's pretty much exactly what Mr. Canon was going to do to Taylor? He saw potential in a student, and was going to help her realize it whether she wanted to or not. That's precisely what Abbie's doing to him. I love that idea!

Sagesse

I'm quite enjoying this one, too. I like that what started out looking like an MC controlling one target is quickly spiraling wider and wider. I look forward to seeing where it's going, as clearly it's already gone differently than I expected. :)

Hidden

Nice story. Hope to some action since we are 4 chapters in