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Teaching Her A Lesson, Part 13 (Patreon)

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2020-07-23 20:00:07
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2026-06
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The dinner party is here! Canon joins Isa and Candy for a pleasant evening of food, drink, and... well, other things. :) (Ho, hum.) We even get some resolution to some old questions some of y'all were wondering about, too. 

More to come!

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M.

What happened to part 12?

WDB

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Addiction

Nice, another plot-twist that introduces an interesting complication! I almost look forward to Abbie getting free reign on the both of them. Really well done and a great set-up for the next few bits! I always enjoy when complications get thrown in the path of the controller, overcoming those makes the victory all the sweeter. The Quina Contemplation was good, Good foreshadowing while still being believable. I pieced it together once the sauce was going to be special and was certain when it was slightly more runny than it should be. ALSO I want to hear more about Mr. Canon's vegetable patch, purely because I included a home garden in one of my own stories and am now keenly invested in anything gardening for some nebulous reason. Non-writing: Also, are you still having issues providing visuals to people for characters? I always find photo-references help me keep it interesting, eventhough it isn't exact. I've been imagining Cassie looking a little like Piper Fawn, for example and for some reason. Apologies for incoherence, Insomniac writing. :p

ukyo_rulz

Nice! I was hoping the story would move to a place with more conflict. I was already thinking Candy could easily get around the thing with plans, but I was less sure that Isa had found a way around being his protector.

Ferrum1

Very interesting, and a direction I wasn't expecting. Hate the cliffhangers, still, but I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next. Who's this Chantel friend? How much does she know? How can some of the commands be lifted but others not? Or is it just a matter of interpretation because his commands were rather open-ended? Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for dropping the chapters quickly!

HardhatDoozer

Well Mr Canon might be a little safer than he thinks. Isa was generally faking with the taser probably. And even a light change in previous rules were rejected by other subjects. So Abbie’s rules form a bit of protection from reprogramming. Abbie is very positive and is a great organizer. So I don’t see why everyone is so hard on her, grouping her with her sister. But Taylor is my sweetheart. I guess a sassy girl is not to everyone’s taste but she brings an enthusiasm to every interaction with Mr Canon that I find pleasing. Her drunk appearance at his house hints at her inner point of view of Mr Canon. There is still more to learn. In general like with typical hypnosis, it is much easier to program someone to do something that they are inclined to agree with, than something that they are inclined to disagree with.

R Masters

Well I did not expect that. Great job keeping the conflict present, I figured this would just be a sex romp chapter.