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This story has gotten long, folks. And yet stupid google docs still insists on suggesting that every single instance of Canon be corrected to Cannon. Yeesh. Anyway, here we round out the week with some good times with the whole teen gang. Not a lot to say here, but ya know, more to come. :) Enjoy the rest of your weekends!

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WDB

"I don't really know where the story will go, exactly, or how far, but I had a fun bit of nostalgia in writing it, and hope to have some more." SIXTEEN CHAPTERS LATER "This story has gotten long, folks."

HardhatDoozer

A fun game indeed. And even with the foreshadowing from in class from previous chapters, I’m still surprised by that twist at the end. If honest Cassie was a shock, Tabs is totally a pill. She is so funny.

Cae_sar

I called the twist! At least the first one. Very curious to see where it goes after that. I feel Tabs one command is a bit of a bore but I can see the potential here.

Ferrum1

I'm all for twists and turns, but that ending killed it for me. If there's one thing I'm not into.... that'd be it. Remember what I said about the Stern sisters not being worth the trouble, hot as they might be? Yep.

qxvw198

I also found the ending to be not to my taste. I do realize that no one is required to write to my taste. I will read the next chapter, when available, before deciding whether to continue. I hope it will be more like the author's usual work.

ukyo_rulz

That was a bold choice for the ending, to be sure. I called the first surprise pretty early but I could never have guessed the surprise at the end. Excited to see where you go from here LOL.

icebear

Mad props btw to the geniuses who predicted Tabitha's conversion back when. I had thought I was being sneakyish at the time, but some of you are too darn smart for me. I was at least glad nobody quite predicted the full extent of their tricksing. :D

andy may phan

In Google docs, go to Tools > Spelling and grammar > Personal dictionary and add "Canon".

icebear

Ha! That's what I get for not proofreading comments when I type with my phone. (Because we all know I'd never otherwise make a typo.)

Jack Elliott

I thought the ending was funny. I actually rate that ending as one of the better twists (that ending isn’t playing safe with your readership, and the foreshadowing with Tabitha doubled as a red-herring - didn’t see it coming - props).

Jack Elliott

That, and it’s totally in keeping with the Stern sisters’ characters.

R Masters

Ha! I'm curious where Abbie is going with this, she usually has 2 reasons for everything she does.

Unlikely

Just because I can see the twist wasn't everybody's favorite, I wanna throw out there that I was totally onboard for it lol not just for the main surprise, which was nice, but also just for the character in question's reaction which was pretty hilarious, and really a contrast to pretty much every other character in the cast's personality