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Whew! Man, this one took me some doing before I got it like I wanted it. After leaving you with what seems to have been everyone's favorite twist, this chapter focuses pretty heavily on the addition of Tabitha Hutchings to the ensemble. I had a good idea who she was, but it took a lot of doing to get her to come across the way I wanted, so hopefully it worked out. We'll iron out the kinks as we move forward, but for now, here we go. Have a good weekend everybody. More to come!

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WDB

"We'll iron out the kinks as we move forward, but for now, here we go." Don't you *dare* iron out the kinks! The kinks are what I'm paying for! If anything, you should be adding *more* kinks!

Sagesse

Bravo! The first half teased it really well and built up the anticipation of what could be, and the second half delivered like crazy.

ukyo_rulz

Still good stuff. Keep doing what you're doing.

ZeroCross

Wow. Truly masterful. It hits so many of my kinks, in ways that most stories never do. I typically date these straight A girls; seeing her tendencies and intelligence weaponized to sluttify Tabitha was so incredibly. This may be the best chapter you've ever written. It truly felt like the sex occurred because of how and who both character are. The Sterns? Who?

HardhatDoozer

Ah, the greatly anticipated return of the IceBear slow blowjob. I’m pretty sure only in IceBear stories do 60 minute plus blow jobs appear. I’ve spent a surprising amount of time wondering about them. And of the existing pantheon of characters I thought only Megan would be capable of such a feat. But Megan’s character has gone in a different direction. Tabatha definitely delivers the best when she is herself I think. I’m quite happy that Canon told her to set aside he roll play for now. Her reaction to sincere approval is going to be quite fun. I can’t wait for them to go all the way. It’s going to be explosive 🧨.

Jordan del

Loved it. Also super excited for the reveal that Abbie has somehow gotten serenix into the water supply. Or maybe just his house. But i am so excited to see where Tabitha goes with this. That dirty talk was awesome

Sagesse

Completely unrelated to the story, I have to say that it took me a year to notice that the page header isn't just an abstract swirl of ethereal lights, and is in fact an ice bear. That's very awesome, even if it wasn't immediately obvious to my apparently impaired brain.

Colin Deadrick

I really am hoping for a massive epilogue that goes through things from Taylor's POV. I.e. Wild Things. She clearly has something brewing and Canon keeps edging to it just to be led by his dick back to obliviousness.

Ded22

These past few chapters have all been good, but for me they've all been overshadowed by the "Fireworks Factory" signs along the way, and I'll probably have a better opinion of them after we finally get to some Candy and Isa action.

R Masters

Well Tabitha is fun. As with most of the girls, I find myself imagining the character dynamics between Tabitha and her fellow slavegirls when Mr Canon isn't around. Strange friendships. I'm also quite curious what other programs Abbie has running in her head, whether she decided to extend "Abbie is the boss of me" to the rest of the gang.